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VARIOUS CAREER AND ACADEMIC CHOICES TAKJEN BY HIGH SCHOOL GRADUATES IN LAKESIDE COUNTY IN 2010 AND 2020.

VARIOUS CAREER AND ACADEMIC CHOICES TAKJEN BY HIGH SCHOOL GRADUATES IN LAKESIDE COUNTY IN 2010 AND 2020. EowMb
THE INFORMATION ABOUT CORPORATE AND EDUCATION OPTION FOR GRADUATES OF HIGH SCHOOL IN THE LAKESIDE COUNTRY IS GIVEN BY PIE CHART, FROM 2010 TO 2020. AT A GLANCE, IT IS NOTABLE THAT ALL THE TREND HAVE RIDES OVER THE DECADES. INITIALLY THE ELECTIVE AMONG STUDENTS FOR COLLAGE HAD THE HIGHEST, ALTHOUGH ITS DROP AFTER THAT. MEANWHILE, THE MOST DRAMATIC INCREASE OBSERVED IN OWN STARTUP WHICH IS BECOME SECOND MAJOR PRIFERED OPTION. ALTHOUGH, PROPORTION FOR WORKING WAS HIGHER, WHICH DROPPED MORE THAN A HALF THROUGH THE PERIOD OF DECADE. TO COMMENCE WITH, THE INITIAL TIMES, WHERE THE LARGEST CONTRIBUTION MADE BY GOING FOR COLLAGE, HOWEVER, ITS HAD DROPPED BY 17% IN 2020. SAME AS, RATIO AMONG STUDENTS FOR CHOOSING CORPORATE WORK WAS ACCOUNTED FOR NEARLY A QUATER IN THE YEAR 2010, AFTER THAT IT WAS FALL UP TO 10% IN THE YEAR 2020. IN ADDITION, THE MOST REMARKABLE CHANGES ANALYSE BY STARTING A BUSINESS. WHICH WAS LIABLE FOR THE LOWEST PERCENTAGES OF 2010 RATIO WHICH WAS 5% ONLY, THEN IT ROSED BY CLOSELY 5 FOLD AND HAVE REACHED 25% IN 2020. ON THE OTHER HAND, THE RATIO OF NO IDEA AMONG RECENT HIGH SCHOOL GRADUATES HAD ABOUT 5% IN 2010, AND THEN ITS SKY ROCKETED BY 3 FOLD INCREASE IN 2010 AND ACCOUNTED FOR 15%. IN CONTRARY, THE ONLY OPTION AMONG HIGH SCHOOL GRADUATES WHICH SHOW ONLY 3% GROWTH IN BETWEEN 2010 TO 2020, THAT IS WORKING AS A FRE LANCER.
THE INFORMATION ABOUT CORPORATE AND EDUCATION OPTION FOR GRADUATES OF HIGH SCHOOL IN THE LAKESIDE COUNTRY IS
GIVEN
BY PIE CHART, FROM 2010 TO 2020. AT A GLANCE, IT IS NOTABLE THAT ALL THE TREND HAVE RIDES OVER THE DECADES.
INITIALLY
THE ELECTIVE AMONG STUDENTS FOR COLLAGE HAD THE HIGHEST, ALTHOUGH ITS DROP AFTER THAT. MEANWHILE, THE MOST DRAMATIC INCREASE OBSERVED IN
OWN
STARTUP WHICH
IS BECOME
SECOND MAJOR PRIFERED OPTION. ALTHOUGH, PROPORTION FOR WORKING WAS HIGHER, WHICH DROPPED MORE THAN A HALF THROUGH THE PERIOD OF DECADE. TO COMMENCE WITH, THE INITIAL TIMES, WHERE THE LARGEST CONTRIBUTION MADE BY GOING FOR COLLAGE,
HOWEVER
, ITS HAD DROPPED BY 17% IN 2020. SAME AS, RATIO AMONG STUDENTS FOR CHOOSING CORPORATE WORK
WAS ACCOUNTED
FOR
NEARLY
A QUATER IN THE YEAR 2010, AFTER THAT IT WAS FALL UP TO 10% IN THE YEAR 2020.
IN ADDITION
, THE MOST REMARKABLE
CHANGES
ANALYSE BY STARTING A BUSINESS. WHICH WAS LIABLE FOR THE LOWEST PERCENTAGES OF 2010 RATIO WHICH WAS 5%
ONLY
, THEN IT ROSED BY
CLOSELY
5 FOLD AND HAVE REACHED 25% IN 2020.
ON THE OTHER HAND
, THE RATIO OF NO
IDEA
AMONG RECENT HIGH SCHOOL GRADUATES HAD ABOUT 5% IN 2010, AND THEN ITS SKY ROCKETED BY 3 FOLD INCREASE IN 2010 AND ACCOUNTED FOR 15%. IN CONTRARY, THE
ONLY
OPTION AMONG HIGH SCHOOL GRADUATES WHICH
SHOW
ONLY
3% GROWTH IN BETWEEN 2010 TO 2020,
THAT IS
WORKING AS A FRE LANCER.
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