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Thousands of victims of political executions lie in anonymous graves. Forensics offers hope for the ‘forgotten’ ones

Thousands of victims of political executions lie in anonymous graves. Forensics offers hope for the ‘forgotten’ ones 2jjgo
n 11 September 1939 in the city of Guadalajara in Spain, 13-year-old Ascensión Mendieta Ibarra opened the door to a group of ‘well-spoken’ men who had come to talk with her father, Timoteo Mendieta Alcalá. Timoteo, 41 years old, was a butcher, president of the local union, and father of seven. Upon gaining entrance to the house, the men arrested Timoteo and took him to a makeshift prison where he was beaten and put through a military tribunal. He was convicted of having given ‘aid to the rebellion’, that is, fighting for Spain’s democracy during the Civil War (1936-39). He was executed against the wall of the Guadalajara civil cemetery on 15 November, and buried in a mass grave. Ascensión blamed herself for her father’s death. She spent the rest of her life fighting for the right to exhume and rebury his body in accordance with her family’s wishes – not his murderers’. The tragedy of Timoteo, and the other 23 people executed and buried alongside him, was a common story. By the end of the Spanish Civil War, more than 500, 000 Spaniards had died, including an estimated 120, 000 to 140, 000 killed in extrajudicial executions – a purge of progressives, democrats, artists, teachers and the unlucky. During the immediate postwar period, more than 400, 000 people were imprisoned, at least 20, 000 of whom were executed. Hundreds of thousands more likely died while incarcerated, from neglect and disease. The almost 40-year dictatorship that followed (1939-75) ensured that General Franco’s power infiltrated every aspect of Spanish society. He was relentless in punishing and repressing the defeated republicans – supporters of the Second Spanish Republic. Franco’s regime enacted a series of economic policies that effectively created second-class citizens. War widows and orphans, or those wounded on the Francoist side, received pensions or jobs, while their republican counterparts received nothing. The regime seized the property and assets of republican families, crushed unions, declared strikes to be acts of state sabotage, and purged ‘Leftist’ professions. These economic policies left most republican families in abject poverty. In a particularly cruel form of psychic violence, the regime also banned all death rituals, including any kind of public mourning for those who died on the republican side during the war and those executed during the immediate postwar era. Simple markers of respect for the dead, such as placing flowers on unmarked graves, had to be done secretly, for to do so publicly was to risk one’s life. During my time in Spain, I heard a story of a widow who, after having her life threatened for erecting a memorial that was destroyed multiple times by the local police, scattered seeds over what she thought was her husband’s grave. Every spring since, for more than 80 years, a flood of lilies sprouts up over the hillside. A beautiful, but silent, protest. After Franco’s death in 1975, the Spanish political elites decided, in the hope of maintaining political and economic stability, to pass what came to be known as ‘the pact of forgetting’. This agreement, made between the Right and the Left, asserted that the atrocities that had occurred during the Civil War and the Franco regime were to be forgiven and forgotten. This institutionalisation of sanitised silence preserved the status quo of victors and losers. Some victims’ families, like that of Ascensión’s, were able to finally place a headstone over the mass grave they assumed held their loved ones. But many more were left with nothing but fading pictures and deafening silence from their government. For almost 30 years, the Spanish population internalised the ‘pact of forgetting’. Then, in the new millennium, the forensics-based human rights movement reached Spain. The silence that had long kept away the past began to break down, and those who had been killed by Franco spoke once again.
n
11 September 1939 in the city of Guadalajara in Spain, 13-year-
old
Ascensión
Mendieta
Ibarra opened the door to a group of ‘well-spoken’
men
who
had
come
to talk with her father,
Timoteo
Mendieta
Alcalá
.
Timoteo
, 41 years
old
, was a butcher, president of the local union, and father of seven. Upon gaining entrance to the
house
, the
men
arrested
Timoteo
and took him to a makeshift prison where he
was beaten
and put through a military tribunal. He
was convicted
of having
given
‘aid to the rebellion’,
that is
, fighting for Spain’s democracy during the
Civil
War
(1936-39). He
was executed
against the wall of the Guadalajara
civil
cemetery on 15 November, and buried in a mass grave.
Ascensión
blamed herself for her father’s death. She spent the rest of her life fighting for the right to exhume and rebury his body in accordance with her
family’s
wishes
not his murderers’. The tragedy of
Timoteo
, and the other 23
people
executed and buried alongside him, was a common story. By the
end
of the Spanish
Civil
War
, more than 500, 000 Spaniards had
died
, including an estimated 120, 000 to 140, 000 killed in extrajudicial executions
a purge of progressives, democrats, artists, teachers and the unlucky. During the immediate postwar period, more than 400, 000
people
were imprisoned
, at least 20, 000 of whom
were executed
. Hundreds of thousands more likely
died
while incarcerated, from neglect and disease. The almost
40-year
dictatorship that followed (1939-75) ensured that General Franco’s power infiltrated every aspect of Spanish society. He was relentless in punishing and repressing the defeated
republicans
supporters of the Second Spanish Republic. Franco’s
regime
enacted a series of economic policies that
effectively
created second-
class
citizens.
War
widows and orphans, or those wounded on the Francoist side, received pensions or jobs, while their
republican
counterparts received nothing. The
regime
seized the property and assets of
republican
families
, crushed unions, declared strikes to be acts of state sabotage, and purged ‘Leftist’ professions. These economic policies
left
most
republican
families
in abject poverty. In a
particularly
cruel form of psychic violence, the
regime
also
banned all death rituals, including any kind of public mourning for those
who
died
on the
republican
side during the
war
and those executed during the immediate postwar era. Simple markers of respect for the dead, such as placing flowers on unmarked graves, had to
be done
secretly
, for to do
so
publicly
was to
risk
one’s life. During my time in Spain, I heard a story of a widow
who
, after having her life threatened for erecting a memorial that was
destroyed
multiple times by the local police, scattered seeds over what she
thought
was her husband’s grave. Every spring since, for more than 80 years, a flood of lilies sprouts up over the hillside. A
beautiful
,
but
silent, protest. After Franco’s death in 1975, the Spanish political elites decided, in the hope of maintaining political and economic stability, to pass what came to
be known
as ‘the pact of forgetting’. This agreement, made between the Right and the
Left
, asserted that the atrocities that had occurred during the
Civil
War
and the Franco
regime
were to
be forgiven
and forgotten. This
institutionalisation
of
sanitised
silence preserved the status quo of victors and losers.
Some
victims’
families
, like that of
Ascensión
’s, were able to
finally
place a headstone over the mass grave they assumed held their
loved
ones
.
But
many
more were
left
with nothing
but
fading pictures and deafening silence from their
government
. For almost 30 years, the Spanish population
internalised
the ‘pact of forgetting’. Then, in the new millennium, the forensics-based human rights movement reached Spain. The silence that had long
kept
away the past began to break down, and those
who
had
been killed
by Franco spoke once again.
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