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Sleeping is one of the most essential factors of every living organism. However, today a number of people are having problems on getting enough sleep. As a result of this, different kinds of health issues, like an insomnia are emerging. In these days many people are not satisfied with their sleep hours. Because of the lack of sleep, they are becoming vulnerable to various psychological problems such as depression, anxiety, nervousness and insomnia. Besides, it affects one's productivity level in his workplace. But there are many ways to solve this problem effectively. It is important for governments to act quickly to tackle this problem because of the raising numbers of health issues. In order to do this, first of all, governments should reduce working hours and increase salaries of employers especially, in developing countries. Secondly, authorities should organize psychological centres where their citizens can get free consulting service. In addition to this, employers should be obliged to pass medical examinations in every six months. Moreover, individuals should be taught about the importance of sleep in people's health and asked to try to sleep early instead of doing other stuff. In conclusion, I would like to say despite the fact that, shortage in sleep can cause severe results, it can be solved with the help of abovementioned methods.

Sleeping is one of the most essential factors of every living organism. However
, today
 a number of people
 are having problems
 on getting enough
sleep
. As a result
 of this, different
 kinds of health issues, like an insomnia are emerging.

In these days many
people
 are not satisfied with their sleep
 hours. Because
 of the lack of sleep
, they are becoming vulnerable to various psychological problems
 such as depression, anxiety, nervousness and insomnia. Besides
, it affects one's productivity level in his workplace. But
 there are many
 ways to solve this problem
effectively
.

It is important
 for governments
 to act quickly
 to tackle this problem
because
 of the raising numbers of health issues. In order to do this, first of all
, governments
 should reduce
 working hours and increase salaries of employers especially
, in developing countries
. Secondly
, authorities should organize psychological centres
 where their citizens can get
 free consulting service. In addition
 to this, employers should be obliged
 to pass medical examinations in every six months. Moreover
, individuals should be taught
 about the importance of sleep
 in people
's health and asked to try to sleep
 early instead
 of doing other stuff.

In conclusion
, I would like to say despite the fact that, shortage in sleep
 can cause severe results, it can be solved
 with the help
 of abovementioned
 methods. 

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