The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view?
The young today spend a large amount of their leisure time in shopping centres. It is feared that this could have a negative influence on the young and society. with this view? oWBkB
Nowadays, it is commonly seen that teenagers are spending their spare time in shopping malls. It is argued by the humans that it can have dreadful impact on both juniors and the community. Therefore, I believe it can have hazardous influence to some extent.
To begin with, numerous juveniles are spending their leisure time on unvaluable things rather than spending time on something major things such as reading books, news, spending time with parents and so on. Doing so can help children to have crucial knowledge on something significant. Moreover, they all will be far from those negative impacts. To exemplify, back then in 2018 in Nepal, a number of teenagers were seen buying in expensive malls, playing video games and many more. As a result, they were seen having unsatisfactory grades in all subjects. Many people opine that it is because of not utilizing time properly. That is why children should spend time reading instead of wasting their leisure time.
However, there are many beneficial advantages of it. Firstly, many juveniles are seen tired after their schools as they are busy all the day. It will assist them to be relax and spend some quality time with friends. Even it will help them to boost their minds and can make them ready for their next days as well. As per the reports, it is heard that spending spare time is helping students to have desired score in subjects. As a result, both children and society are benefitting from it.
To sum up, there may be many advantages of it. Nonetheless i opine that young should spend time in reading than spending time in malls. As, it will benefit both children and society. 
Nowadays, it is 
commonly
 seen
 that 
teenagers
 are 
spending
 their spare 
time
 in shopping malls. It 
is argued
 by the humans that it can have dreadful impact on both juniors and the community. 
Therefore
, I believe it can have hazardous influence to 
some
 extent.
To 
begin
 with, numerous juveniles are 
spending
 their leisure 
time
 on 
unvaluable
 things 
rather
 than 
spending
 time
 on something major things such as reading books, news, 
spending
 time
 with parents and 
so
 on. Doing 
so
 can 
help
 children
 to have crucial knowledge on something significant. 
Moreover
, they all will be far from those 
negative
 impacts. To exemplify, back then in 2018 in Nepal, a number of 
teenagers
 were 
seen
 buying in expensive malls, playing video games and 
many
 more. 
As a result
, they were 
seen
 having unsatisfactory grades in all subjects. 
Many
 people
 opine that it is 
because
 of not utilizing 
time
 properly
. 
That is
 why 
children
 should spend 
time
 reading 
instead
 of wasting their leisure time.
However
, there are 
many
 beneficial advantages of it. 
Firstly
, 
many
 juveniles are 
seen
 tired after their schools as they are busy all the day. It will assist them to be 
relax
 and spend 
some
 quality 
time
 with friends. Even it will 
help
 them to boost their minds and can 
make
 them ready for their 
next
 days 
as well
. As per the reports, it 
is heard
 that 
spending
 spare 
time
 is helping students to have desired score in subjects. 
As a result
, both 
children
 and society are 
benefitting
 from it.
To sum up, there may be 
many
 advantages of it. 
Nonetheless
 i
 opine that young should spend 
time
 in reading than 
spending
 time
 in malls. As, it will benefit both 
children
 and society. 
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