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The wealth gap between 1st world countries and 3rd world countries seems to be increasing. How can we reduce this gap? Do you think that developed countries have a duty to assist developing countries in every way?

The wealth gap between 1st world countries and 3rd world countries seems to be increasing. How can we reduce this gap? Do you think that developed countries have a duty to assist developing countries in every way? OEMB7
The wealth gap is a topic that has been around for a while, with a fair amount of discussion having been made around the topic, below, I will attempt to explain my views on it and how it can be addressed. To start off the discussion we must identify the problem, wealth. Tounderstand this, we must look at the deficits that have occurred over the years. 3rd world countries rely on their natural resources to keep their economy alive. Meaning natural resources such as gold, oil, gas and spices are the main source of economic exports and income. Historically these economies traded internally or with neighbours for what was deemed fair trade value, this hasn’t been the case in recent years due to a few policy changes that have occurred. Gold used to be the standard in which global trade was based on due to the abundance of the resources in western “1st world countries. ” However, when these minerals started to run out, discoveries of mineral reserves were found in 3rd world countries. This resulted in policy changes. President Nixon in the 1970’s changed the trade base from gold to the United States dollar, a big power move because now all of the minerals had no value unless they could be traded for the United States dollar or equivalent foreign exchange – thus putting the wealth base on an overseas entity rather than the country of origin. It doesn’t end there, if these third world countries didn’t agree with the policy or trade values, sanctions of trade were placed on the countries, forcing compliance, and thus increasing the wealth gap due to the unfair trade value of how much the minerals were being acquired for and sold. The solution to reducing the wealth gap is allowing fair trade values to become normal and reduce unfair practises and exploitation. 1st world countries have a role to play in this and it could be as simple as policy change and welcoming 3rd world countries to the table to include them in trades rather than exploiting the value.
The
wealth
gap is a topic that has been around for a while, with a
fair
amount of discussion having
been made
around the topic, below, I will attempt to
explain
my views on it and how it can
be addressed
. To
start
off the discussion we
must
identify the problem,
wealth
.
Tounderstand
this, we
must
look at the deficits that have occurred over the years. 3rd
world
countries
rely on their natural resources to
keep
their economy alive. Meaning natural resources such as gold, oil, gas and spices are the main source of economic exports and income.
Historically
these economies traded
internally
or with
neighbours
for what
was deemed
fair
trade
value
, this hasn’t been the case in recent years due to a few
policy
changes
that have occurred. Gold
used
to be the standard in which global
trade
was based
on due to the abundance of the resources in western “1st
world
countries
. ”
However
, when these
minerals
started
to run out, discoveries of mineral reserves
were found
in 3rd
world
countries
. This resulted in
policy
changes
. President Nixon in the
1970’s
changed
the
trade
base from gold to the United States dollar, a
big
power
move
because
now
all of the
minerals
had no
value
unless they could
be traded
for the United States dollar or equivalent foreign exchange
thus
putting the
wealth
base on an overseas entity
rather
than the
country
of origin. It doesn’t
end
there, if these third
world
countries
didn’t
agree
with the
policy
or
trade
values, sanctions of
trade
were placed
on the
countries
, forcing compliance, and
thus
increasing the
wealth
gap due to the unfair
trade
value
of how much the
minerals
were
being acquired
for and sold. The solution to reducing the
wealth
gap is allowing
fair
trade
values to become normal and
reduce
unfair
practises
and exploitation. 1st
world
countries
have a role to play in this and it could be as simple as
policy
change
and welcoming 3rd
world
countries
to the table to include them in
trades
rather
than exploiting the
value
.
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