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The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant.

The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. 77ANX
The given line graph depicts the information about spending upon three different sectors such as education, pension and medical care from the period of the 2001 to till 2015. To begin with, in the year of 2001, there was the highest spending money on the education about 15% and in the present year It is slowly decline. But in the future year, it is expected to remain same. Furthermore, in the beginning year medical care was the second highest spending sector was approximately 11%. However it is minimally rose in the current years but it will predict that it will continuously went down. On the other hand, 8% of the money spend upon the pension during the period of 2001. Although, it is remain same after two decades. After the year of 2021, the rate of spending finance on pension will increase significantly and reached at 20%. Overall, it is conclude that the spending on the health remain same after few decrease. Yet the medical care as well as pension show the opposite trend in the future as compared to the beginning years.
The
given
line graph depicts the information about
spending
upon three
different
sectors such as education,
pension
and medical care from the period of the 2001 to till 2015. To
begin
with, in the
year
of 2001, there was the highest
spending
money on the education about 15% and in the present
year
It is
slowly
decline.
But
in the future
year
, it is
expected
to remain same.
Furthermore
, in the beginning
year
medical care was the second highest
spending
sector was approximately 11%.
However
it is
minimally
rose in the
current
years
but
it will predict that it will
continuously
went down.
On the other hand
, 8% of the money spend upon the
pension
during the period of 2001. Although, it is remain same after two decades. After the
year
of 2021, the rate of
spending
finance on
pension
will increase
significantly
and reached at 20%.
Overall
, it is conclude that the
spending
on the health remain same after few decrease.
Yet
the medical care
as well
as
pension
show
the opposite trend in the future as compared to the beginning years.
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