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describe people and provide

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Some people say that your family is less important, than your friends. I think there are many different situations and many different variants, what is more important. All difference, between people from out family and between our friends, is that people from our family are connected with us by blood, but our friends are not connected with us by blood. So, our family is more important, than our friends in biological side. Because the most important thing for any animal in the world is to continue your family, then continue family of your friends or different animal like you. It is animal’s instinct, which is created by evolution. But animals and humans are different. In modern world each human has everything to grow up, without his family. It would be not so easy to grow without family, then in family, but it is steel possible. So, human should not stay in family to help him. So, in modern world we can chose people to comfortable life, without any problem. For different people are different situations. For example: First human lives in very lovely and good family. People from his family help him to find himself in the world and support him in any starts and in work. But second human lives in very bad family. People from his family hate him and do not support him in bad situations. For first human his family is more important or in same level with his friends. But for second human situation is different. For him his friends are more important, than his family. So, for us more important are people, who help and support us in bad situations. This people can be different, and they do not depend on which society they are. This people can be our friends or from our family. I think that nobody is more important, than other. But it is important, that this people should support us.
Some
people
say that your
family
is less
important
, than your
friends
. I
think
there are
many
different
situations
and
many
different
variants,
what is more
important
. All difference, between
people
from out
family
and between our
friends
, is that
people
from our
family
are connected
with us by blood,
but
our
friends
are not connected with us by blood.
So
, our
family
is more
important
, than our
friends
in biological side.
Because
the most
important
thing for any
animal
in the
world
is to continue your
family
, then continue
family
of your
friends
or
different
animal
like you. It is
animal’s
instinct, which
is created
by evolution.
But
animals
and
humans
are
different
. In modern
world
each
human
has everything to grow up, without his
family
. It would be not
so
easy to grow without
family
, then in
family
,
but
it is steel possible.
So
,
human
should not stay in
family
to
help
him.
So
, in modern
world
we can chose
people
to comfortable life, without any problem. For
different
people
are
different
situations
.
For example
:
First
human
lives
in
very
lovely and
good
family
.
People
from his
family
help
him to find himself in the
world
and
support
him in any
starts
and in work.
But
second
human
lives
in
very
bad
family
.
People
from his
family
hate him and do not
support
him in
bad
situations
. For
first
human
his
family
is more
important
or in same level with his
friends
.
But
for second
human
situation
is
different
. For him his
friends
are more
important
, than his family.
So
, for us more
important
are
people
, who
help
and
support
us in
bad
situations
. This
people
can be
different
, and they do not depend on which society they are. This
people
can be our
friends
or from our
family
. I
think
that nobody is more
important
, than other.
But
it is
important
, that this
people
should
support
us.
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