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Taking Risk and risk Work

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Nowdays many pepole take a steps to improve them lives on professional lives and personal lives even the steps usualy have a risk becuase every step on both ways have a risk, on my view the pepole should take a huge step to improve them live even if they need to take a risk. On one hand, the main advantage of take risk that will give him a huge improve to his profissional live, the reason of take the risk becaus the risk will open new doors on the professional live and personl lives, as an example that employee take a risk to quit his job on the company to open his own bussines and that risk is good to open a new doors in his perofessinal live and on his personal live will improve his live by improve his profits more than depand only on the salalry, also other advantage is improve his knowleadge about bussines world. On other hand the main disadvantage of taking risk on proffesonal live that the risk on the start is a unknown road on other word the road will unclaer if the risk will come with sucses or not and the reason is the risk somtimes give us the opsite of our wishes and maybe the risk get us down as example open a bussines because of other pepole open it and sucess and the person do not know anything about that bussines fealid and other disadvantage its become so hard to get back your old job om the same company if that person faild on his own bussines. In cocnlustion my opinon is that the person shoulkd take a risk if they person study this risk from all of the sides of the risk because the risks always improve theknowleadge of the life
Nowdays
many
pepole
take a
steps
to
improve
them
lives
on professional
lives
and personal
lives
even the
steps
usualy
have a
risk
becuase
every
step
on both ways have a
risk
, on my view the
pepole
should take a huge
step
to
improve
them
live
even if they need to take a
risk
. On one hand, the main advantage of take
risk
that will give him a huge
improve
to his
profissional
live
, the reason of take the
risk
becaus
the
risk
will
open
new doors on the professional
live
and
personl
lives
, as an example that employee take a
risk
to quit his job on the
company
to
open
his
own
bussines
and that
risk
is
good
to
open
a new
doors
in his
perofessinal
live
and on his personal
live
will
improve
his
live
by
improve
his profits more than
depand
only
on the
salalry
,
also
other
advantage is
improve
his
knowleadge
about
bussines
world. On
other
hand the main disadvantage of taking
risk
on
proffesonal
live
that the
risk
on the
start
is
a
unknown road on
other
word the road will
unclaer
if the
risk
will
come
with
sucses
or not and the reason is the
risk
somtimes
give us the
opsite
of our wishes and maybe the
risk
get
us down as example
open
a
bussines
because
of
other
pepole
open
it and
sucess
and the
person
do not know anything about that
bussines
fealid
and
other
disadvantage its become
so
hard
to
get
back your
old
job
om
the same
company
if that
person
faild
on his
own
bussines
. In
cocnlustion
my
opinon
is that the
person
shoulkd
take a
risk
if they
person
study this
risk
from
all of the
sides of the
risk
because
the
risks
always
improve
theknowleadge
of the life
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