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Some people think that in this modern world people are getting dependent on each other, while others think the modern world makes people more independent of each other. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People have different views about whether people in our modern world are becoming more dependent on each other. Whlie independent sometimes be useful in life, I believe that dependent on each other and cooperation with others is more important. On the one hand, independent of each other can be a great source of doing your own things but lost something as well. Firstly, the modern life is so fast that people meet competition at every moment. So it seems that people more independent of each other and don’t want to cooperate with others when they need to compete for the same position. Secondly, people are always busy in their works and need some times to stay alone to think about themselves who they are and what they really want to do. Finally, more and more people in modern world are depend on their phone and they are afraid to talk with others face-to-face, they only can speak with others normally through the internet. On the other hand, it perhaps even more appropriate to dependent on each other. This is the attitude that I believe people in modern life should be cooperate with others and make the biggest profit. For example, as for me I need to finish the assignments of teachers with my partners to get a good scores and learn somethiny well from my classmates, I could not do it by myself as they too difficult to finish. Also, some businessmen have to team-work and no one is less important during the work. At the same time, our community is compose of everyone, the dependence of each other make the modern life energetic and peaceful. In conclusion, I would argue that people are trending dependent on each other and can not leave anyone else.
People
have
different
views about whether
people
in our
modern
world are becoming more
dependent
on each
other
.
Whlie
independent
sometimes be
useful in
life
, I believe that
dependent
on each
other
and cooperation with others is more
important
. On the one hand, independent of each
other
can be a great source of doing your
own
things
but
lost something
as well
.
Firstly
, the
modern
life
is
so
fast
that
people
meet
competition at every moment.
So
it seems that
people
more independent of each
other
and don’t want to cooperate with others when they need to compete for the same position.
Secondly
,
people
are always busy in their works and need
some
times to stay alone to
think
about themselves who they are and what they
really
want to do.
Finally
, more and more
people
in
modern
world are depend on their
phone and
they are afraid to talk with others face-to-face, they
only
can speak with others
normally
through the internet. On the
other
hand, it perhaps even more appropriate to
dependent
on each
other
. This is the attitude that I believe
people
in
modern
life
should be
cooperate
with others and
make
the biggest profit.
For example
, as for me I need to finish the assignments of teachers with my partners to
get
a
good
scores and learn
somethiny
well from my classmates, I could not do it by myself as they too difficult to finish.
Also
,
some
businessmen
have to
team-work and no one is less
important
during the work. At the same time, our community is
compose
of everyone, the dependence of each
other
make
the
modern
life
energetic and peaceful.
In conclusion
, I would argue that
people
are trending
dependent
on each
other
and can not
leave
anyone else.
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