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Should students work along with their studies or not?

Should students work along with their studies or not? Brd

Higher studies have become more important to survive in today’s environment. Some people say students should work along with their studies but some may disagree. First school of thought says that working along with studies gives a student more exposure of the society. The person can implement the work experience in studies and vice versa. Doing both at the same time of span will makes a student multitasker that develop many qualities such as hardworking, quick decision making and problem solving. Not everybody is born with a golden spoon in his mouth. Some people may have to work for the survival or to pay the fee. Working along with studies will make a student more responsible. Other school of thought has a different point of view. If a student is working, he might not be able to fully concentrate on his studies. Less concentration on studies will led to less grades. One may have to get up early to go for work and sleep late because of the university assignments, that might create health issues. Sleeping late can affect the progress at work as well and employer might not be happy with the performance. Doing work along with studies can be very hectic too. A student can’t fully concentrate on his studies. Above all, health is more important than anything else in this world. Both school of thoughts has its own pros and cons and are true at their stance. But in my opinion, benefits of working along with studies are less than not working along with studies, so I support the second school of thought.

Higher studies
 have become more important
 to survive in today
’s environment. Some
people
 say students
 should work
along
 with their studies
but
some
 may disagree.

First
school
 of thought
 says that working
along
 with studies
 gives a student
 more exposure of the society. The person can implement the work
 experience in studies
 and vice versa. Doing both at the same time of span will makes
 a student
multitasker
 that develop many
 qualities such as hardworking, quick decision making
 and problem solving. Not everybody is born
 with a golden spoon in his mouth. Some
people
 may have to
work
 for the survival or to pay the fee. Working
along
 with studies
 will make
 a student
 more responsible.

Other school
 of thought
 has a different
 point of view. If a student
 is working
, he might not be able to fully
 concentrate on his studies
. Less concentration on studies
 will led to less
 grades. One may have to
get
 up early to go for work
 and sleep late because
 of the university assignments, that might create health issues. Sleeping late can affect the progress at work
as well
 and employer might not be happy with the performance. Doing work
along
 with studies
 can be very
 hectic too. A student
 can’t fully
 concentrate on his studies
. Above all
, health is more important
 than anything else in this world.

Both school
 of thoughts
 has its own
 pros and cons and are true at their stance. But
 in my opinion, benefits of working
along
 with studies
 are less than not working
along
 with studies
, so
 I support the second school
 of thought
. 

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