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“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly it would be better to invest in preventative measures.

“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly it would be better to invest in preventative measures. GDEBx
“Prevention is better than cure” this saying is in our world since many years, but we are neglecting this. People of this world tries to eliminate the disease from the human body instead of take a deep dive for the reason of this issue. Whenever there is problem in our body we always try to cure that thing as fast as we can because we don’t have to time stop ourselves. Have we ever thought, why any disease happened to us? There is always a root cause of any disease. You can take example of Dengue, Malaria, Diarrhea all these issues are related with water weather we consume it or we store it. According to the study of a company every year nearly 1000 people dies due to Dengue but still we are at ground zero with this problem. The best example we saw in recent years with Covid-19 where we took all necessary preventative measures to eliminate the risk of getting infected. We saw people took these measures seriously and we fought a great battle with this pandemic. There are many comities which is formed by the government of the different countries who are issuing different guidelines regarding preventative methods to overcome from certain disease. At last in my opinion, it’s high time when government should take strict actions against people who are not following necessary measures to eliminate the risk of getting infected any disease. Government should run some campaign and seminars to educate the rural population of their county.
“Prevention is better than cure” this saying is in our world since
many
years,
but
we are neglecting this.
People
of this world tries to eliminate the
disease
from the human body
instead
of take a deep dive for the reason of this issue. Whenever there is problem in our body we always try to cure that thing as
fast
as we can
because
we don’t
have to
time
stop
ourselves. Have we ever
thought
, why any
disease
happened to us? There is always a root cause of any
disease
. You can take example of Dengue, Malaria, Diarrhea all these issues
are related
with water weather we consume it or we store it. According to the study of a
company
every year
nearly
1000
people
dies
due to Dengue
but
still
we are at ground zero with this problem. The best example we
saw
in recent years with Covid-19 where we took all necessary preventative measures to eliminate the
risk
of getting infected. We
saw
people
took these measures
seriously
and we fought a great battle with this pandemic. There are
many
comities which
is formed
by the
government
of the
different
countries who are issuing
different
guidelines regarding preventative methods to overcome from certain disease. At last in my opinion, it’s high time when
government
should take strict actions against
people
who are not following necessary measures to eliminate the
risk
of getting infected any
disease
.
Government
should run
some
campaign and seminars to educate the rural population of their county.
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