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People are destroying our world

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Humans are naturally inclined to want more than they have. For this reason, we strive to develop more and more every day, but we are not aware that we are leaving an unlivable world to future generations as a result. On the one hand, it's admirable that people are trying to improve so much. Unfortunately, nowadays, almost no one cares about developing and protecting our world. Hundreds, maybe thousands, of trees are cut down every day in our world for the sake of development. People kill animals for the sake of wearing expensive bags. In a way, we are all trying to make the world a better place in our own way, but what we are actually doing is making it a place that will not be lived in the future. Our world is constantly warming up every year because of what we do, and the poles are almost completely melted and destroyed. On the other hand, because of what we have done, we are killing the marvels that God has given us. Animals die because of the chemical wastes we spread to the seas and air. The fish have become unable to breathe and kill themselves. Magnificent beings such as Lynx, Leopard, Cheetah, Penguin are about to come to an end. As the most powerful beings living on earth, we think that we are the sole owners of the world and we slaughter animals mercilessly. But there is one thing we forget that the world is not only our home. All these things we have caused, such as climate change, drought, pollution, animal extinction, have already begun to end in disaster. Because of what we do, disasters such as viruses, fires, wars do not leave us. So in conclusion, if we continue to live like this, what we experience now will be nothing compared to future disasters. Let's not destroy our world to protect animals, and most importantly to leave a home for the next ones.

Humans are naturally
 inclined to want more than they have. For this reason
, we strive to develop more and more every day, but
 we are not aware that we are leaving an unlivable world
 to future generations as a result
. On the one hand, it's admirable that people
 are trying to improve
so
 much. Unfortunately, nowadays, almost no one cares about developing and protecting our world
. Hundreds, maybe thousands, of trees are cut
 down every day in our world
 for the sake of development. People
 kill animals
 for the sake of wearing expensive bags. In a way, we are all trying to make
 the world
 a better place in our own
 way, but
 what we are actually doing is making it a place that will not be lived
 in the future. Our world
 is constantly
 warming up every year because
 of what we do, and the poles are almost completely melted and destroyed
. On the other hand
, because
 of what we have done, we are killing the marvels that God has given
 us. Animals
die
because
 of the chemical wastes we spread to the seas and air. The fish have become unable to breathe and kill themselves. Magnificent beings such as Lynx, Leopard, Cheetah, Penguin are about to come
 to an end
. As the most powerful beings living on earth, we think
 that we are the sole owners of the world and
 we slaughter animals
mercilessly
. But
 there is one thing we forget that the world
 is not only
 our home. All these things we have caused, such as climate change
, drought, pollution, animal
 extinction, have already begun to end
 in disaster. Because
 of what we do, disasters such as viruses, fires, wars do not leave
 us. So
in conclusion
, if we continue to live
 like this, what we experience now
 will be nothing compared to future disasters. Let
's not destroy
 our world
 to protect animals
, and most importantly
 to leave
 a home for the next
 ones. 

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