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Parable of the Sower: Modern Utopia

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Lauren Olamina, the protagonist, is a black teenager living in Los Angeles in 2024. Lauren's father is a minister who also gives lessons at a local college. She lives with her four brothers, her father, and Cory, her stepmother. They live in a specific place surrounded by a wall that serves as a secure base where people of various races and religions look out for one another. Cory is in charge of the neighborhood school. On the other side of the wall, homeless and starved people try to survive, and small bands of criminals who are high on "pyro, " a substance that makes smokers want to start fires, rove around looking for settlements to assault and burn down. Lauren's father encourages his neighbors to practice self-defense, but he disapproves of Lauren's discussion of leaving to the north with others and tells her to stop talking about it. He instead advises her to teach the survival information she knows to the people. Lauren is distinct in two respects. First, she has hyperempathy syndrome as a result of a substance that her mother abused when she was pregnant with Lauren: she experiences other people's pleasures as well as their pains as if they were her own. Lauren's understanding of the world is unusual: she admires and respects her father, but she is suspicious of the Christianity that they follow and other popular religions. In her journal, she develops a new way of thinking that she calls Earthseed. Its central tenet is that God is change and can not be stopped. However, God can be influenced. Lauren eventually compiles enough poetry and reflections to create Earthseed: The Book of the Living. Keith, Lauren's eldest younger brother and Cory's favorite child, is suspicious of organized religion as well. He is egotistical and headstrong, full of anxiety to prove everyone else himself as a man, and he is indifferent to his parents' advice. The following year, when the story takes place, he flees from home at the age of thirteen and leads a prosperous life as a gang member for a while, periodically turning up at the family residence to give a chunk of cash without seeing his father because the last time he beat him so badly. After a while, his parents had to identify his corpse. His murderers tortured him till he died but left his face detectable so that he could be identified and could be a threat to others. Lauren's father vanishes on his way back from work only a few months later and has never been seen again, even with the so-called help of police and patrols. The following summer, the neighborhood is attacked by pyromaniacs. Lauren and two others escape, involving Harry, the white resident, and Zahra, the black and the youngest wife of the neighborhood's now-dead polygamist. As seen by Zahra, the pyros killed Cory along with all of Lauren's brothers. Lauren, Harry, and Zahra flee to the shore and then northward along U. S. 101. Lauren, in need of disguising, shortens her hair and pretends that she is a male to make them appear less susceptible. They expand their group as they traveltraveling. During the journey north, Lauren starts telling her companions about Earthseed. The others' levels of curiosity vary, but none are antagonistic to Lauren's views. Lauren is now eighteen. Despite their age gap, she and Taylor Bankole, a doctor who is almost the same age as her father, fall in love. He has an estate on the northern shore, and the area is large enough for the group members to settle and establish the first Earthseed community. After overcoming dangers, the group of Earthseed believers and non-believers arrives at Bankole's land in the north, high in the hills of the redwood forest. The house had been burned down when they arrived, and five skulls inside bear witness to the family's demise. The group is shocked and trying to decide what to do next. Despite the fact that the location of the property's setting has demonstrated that there may be no guarantee of safety and security, Bankole's land remains the best place for them to build the Earthseed community and settle. Lauren and the group call their new home in a far-away location "Acorn" after each of them holds a memorial service for all they have lost in the past. The main character, the young girl Laura, is a pioneer of change. Lauren can't help thinking about the horrific events that are coming, and she's determined to do what she can, rather than turn a blind eye like others living in the same place. As it says at the beginning of the book, Lauren reads all the books she can find and gathers as much information on survival as she can. She is deeply angry with people who are trying to adapt, or rather survive, to the new modern world they live in, because all these people do is to protect themselves in the position they are in and be limited to that. They live from where they sit, just praying and hoping that nothing will happen to them. In this modern world, there is no police to call when there is an incident, theft or murder, because the police want extra money and tax fees so that they can start their investigation. The results of these searches are largely in vain because the police do not care about the events enough to stay awake for an event even if they move a hair. That's why people adopt communitarian attitudes to ensure security and peace in the places where they live, and they keep an eye on each other. The community is held together by a communitarian attitude. "We all know each other here, " Lauren's father explains, "and we rely on each other" (Parable of the Sower, 31). As a result, Butler provides militaristic "privatopia" as one model of an ideal society. To describe modern privatopia, McKenzie contends that we must return to the United States of America, in a socioeconomic situation defined by the loss of the welfare state in the jaws of rampant late capitalism. The word "privatopia" was used in North American literature to designate any exclusive urban development apart from the public environment. In the final three decades of the twentieth century, the concept of political cohesion vanished quickly. (McKenzie, 1994) While the importance of money is gradually increasing, people who cannot even afford water are starting to not buy gasoline for their vehicles and tools, which causes a decrease in the price of gasoline. However, no one drives unless it is absolutely necessary because they have to think of themselves first: “No one I know uses a gas-powered car, truck, or cycle. Vehicles like that are rusting in driveways and being cannibalized for metal and plastic. It's a lot harder to give up water” (18). Apart from that, they have the last remaining Yannis Family screen: “window wall television. ” Thanks to this, they are sometimes aware of the news, but one day, when the news of astronauts from space was given, the peer darkened and is not working again. In the book, much of society's collapse seems to be due to environmental destruction, economic and political destruction, followed by financial problems, and this trio (politics, economy, and environmental problems) brings about the end of humanity. As polluted water and air, venomous chemicals, failed pharmaceutical and scientific experiments resulted in dangerously addictive drugs, people moved from being human to having animal instincts. Corporations which prevailed certain sectors of society and provided protection and infrastructure to those who can afford it, kept poor people away from protection and infrastructure. With the punitive debt policies’ coming to modern lives that damage individuals, benefited corporations are being introduced as part of this process. The Parable of the Sower, in particular, focuses on two fundamental paths to modern utopia: first, the implementation of bureaucratic logic to socioeconomic issues through the agency of the state; and second, the formation of communities of 'them' and 'us' through racial politics (Phillips). The master pattern of racial thinking has largely controlled the meaning of human variety in the contemporary age, with catastrophic implications. As Lauren travels across the "crazy, " "desperate, " and "dangerous" world of the future, the novel foregrounds an old American fantasy: a race war. That vision is played out "on the street" in Butler's novel, where "people were expected to fear and hate everyone but their own kind" (31). Lauren's Books of the Living make a compelling case for the value of a transcending awareness, which sees hope in the most hopeless of seemingly imprisoned conditions. "I don't write Utopian science fiction because I don't believe that imperfect humans can form a perfect society, " Butler has stated (qtd. in Beal 14). Butler's treatment of the concept of change in post-Fordism focuses on the social and political consequences arising from rejections of narratives (Nilges, 4). With the post-Fordism the increase in vehicles, pollution of the environment and the situation they are in drastically has changed. Jerry Phillips applauds Butler's endorsement of the primacy of change, which demonstrates a critical knowledge of history's dialectical process and predicts future potentiality without reverting to "simple determinisms, " resulting in a new "ethics of Being" (302). Change is no longer an ideal that promises to escape the constraints of traditional systems. Instead, change has become the central logic of our post-Fordist day; where the emancipatory demands of postmodern culture and theory are met, but with a different outcome than originally expected. The emancipatory promise that postmodern culture awaits in describing the future and a changing present has manifested itself as nothing more than the basic logic of post-Fordist capitalism in contemporary or post-Fordist culture (Nilges, 5). "God is change, " Lauren says (15). Butler's preoccupation with immortality in historical narrative, the way that time speaks to the emergence of hidden possibilities in the universe, is brought to the fore by the statement that "God is change. " Change, or God, in Lauren's opinion, has no required direction and is free of anthropomorphic attributes such as good and evil. Change has both positive and negative sides; it is inevitable. The dilemma of future potential worlds is confronted when trying to fathom the universe in continual motion. That is to say, one must study the circumstances in which a future perception becomes concretely realized as social reality. Lauren believes that we shape change and change forms us, rather than the other way. Lauren's ideas led her to create Earthseed, a new religion and ethics of being. The book is a postmodern text because it depicts people who see themselves in an ideologic and postmodern situation. Wanzo explains this situation as “a postrevolutionary period of consciousness surrounding political movements dealing with racial and sexual discrimination, colonialism, class oppression, religious fundamentalism, and environmental dangers, as well as the end of many modern technological innovations that are dismantled in apocalyptic circumstances” (74). The challenges of those who work simply to survive and have anything, the life that has fallen on them, and the pictures of violence are all recounted in great detail. These, I believe, are a reflection of how far society has sunk in their current new world; they are described to explain what individuals might become in such a scenario and how they can deviate from being human. The Parable of the Sower, as an exercise in utopianism following the end of Utopia, links itself with both prophetic and postmodern ideas. On the one hand, the novel rejects the notion that metanarratives are unnecessary: metanarratives provide human action psychological force and ethical direction. In their absence, the individual is all too willing to participate in barbaric social behaviors that appear to be eternal necessity (Phillips). The notion of change, when viewed as the driving force of the universe, leads to a dialec- tical understanding of reality. David Harvey claims that "dialectical thinking emphasizes the understanding of processes, flows, fluxes, and relations over the analysis of elements, things, structures, and organized systems" (49) This intersection of religion, logical thinking, and scientific advancement in the twenty-first century indicates that modern interpretations of historical writings can provide the basis for human existence (Ruffin).
Lauren
Olamina
, the protagonist, is a black
teenager
living
in Los Angeles in 2024. Lauren's
father
is a minister
who
also
gives lessons at a local college. She
lives
with her four brothers, her
father
, and Cory, her stepmother. They
live
in a specific
place
surrounded by a wall that serves as a secure base where
people
of various races and
religions
look out for one another. Cory is in charge of the neighborhood school. On the
other
side of the wall, homeless and starved
people
try to survive, and
small
bands of criminals
who
are high on
"
pyro
,
"
a substance that
makes
smokers want to
start
fires, rove around looking for settlements to assault and burn down. Lauren's
father
encourages his neighbors to practice self-defense,
but
he disapproves of Lauren's discussion of leaving to the
north
with others and
tells
her to
stop
talking about it. He
instead
advises her to teach the survival information she knows to the
people
. Lauren is distinct in two respects.
First
, she has
hyperempathy
syndrome
as a result
of a substance that her mother abused when she was pregnant with Lauren: she experiences
other
people
's pleasures
as well
as their pains as if they were her
own
. Lauren's understanding of the
world
is unusual: she admires and respects her
father
,
but
she is suspicious of the Christianity that they follow and
other
popular
religions
. In her journal, she develops a
new
way of
thinking
that she calls
Earthseed
. Its central tenet is that God is
change
and can not be
stopped
.
However
, God can
be influenced
. Lauren
eventually
compiles
enough
poetry and reflections to create
Earthseed
: The
Book
of the
Living
. Keith, Lauren's eldest younger brother and Cory's favorite child, is suspicious of organized
religion
as well
. He is egotistical and headstrong, full of anxiety to prove everyone else himself as a
man
, and he is indifferent to his parents' advice. The following year, when the story takes
place
, he flees from home at the
age
of thirteen and leads a prosperous life as a gang member for a while,
periodically
turning up at the family residence to give a chunk of cash without seeing his
father
because
the last time he beat him
so
badly
. After a while, his parents had to identify his corpse. His murderers tortured him till he
died
but
left
his face detectable
so
that he could
be identified
and could be a threat to others. Lauren's
father
vanishes on his way back from work
only
a few months later and has never been
seen
again, even with the
so
-called
help
of
police
and patrols. The following summer, the neighborhood
is attacked
by pyromaniacs. Lauren and two others escape, involving Harry, the white resident, and
Zahra
, the black and the youngest wife of the neighborhood's
now
-dead polygamist. As
seen
by
Zahra
, the
pyros
killed Cory along with all of Lauren's brothers. Lauren, Harry, and
Zahra
flee to the shore and then northward along U. S. 101. Lauren, in need of disguising, shortens her hair and pretends that she is a male to
make
them appear less susceptible. They expand their
group
as they
traveltraveling
. During the journey
north
, Lauren
starts
telling her companions about
Earthseed
. The others' levels of curiosity vary,
but
none are antagonistic to Lauren's views. Lauren is
now
eighteen. Despite their
age
gap, she and Taylor
Bankole
, a doctor
who
is almost the same
age
as her
father
, fall in
love
. He has an estate on the northern shore, and the area is large
enough
for the
group
members to settle and establish the
first
Earthseed
community
. After overcoming
dangers
, the
group
of
Earthseed
believers and non-believers arrives at
Bankole
's land in the
north
, high in the hills of the redwood forest. The
house
had
been burned
down when they arrived, and five skulls inside bear witness to the family's demise. The
group
is shocked
and trying to decide what to do
next
. Despite the fact that the location of the property's setting has demonstrated that there may be no guarantee of safety and security,
Bankole
's land remains the best
place
for them to build the
Earthseed
community
and settle. Lauren and the
group
call their
new
home in a far-away location
"
Acorn
"
after each of them holds a memorial service for all they have lost in the past. The main character, the young girl Laura, is a pioneer of
change
. Lauren can't
help
thinking
about the horrific
events
that are coming, and she's determined to do what she can,
rather
than turn a blind eye like others
living
in the same
place
. As it says at the beginning of the
book
, Lauren reads all the
books
she can find and gathers as much information on survival as she can. She is
deeply
angry with
people
who
are trying to adapt, or
rather
survive, to the
new
modern
world
they
live
in,
because
all these
people
do is to protect themselves in the position they are in and
be limited
to that. They
live
from where they sit,
just
praying and hoping that nothing will happen to them. In this
modern
world
, there is no
police
to call when there is an incident, theft or murder,
because
the
police
want extra money and tax fees
so
that they can
start
their investigation. The results of these searches are
largely
in vain
because
the
police
do not care about the
events
enough
to stay awake for an
event
even if they
move
a hair. That's why
people
adopt
communitarian
attitudes to ensure security and peace in the
places
where they
live
, and they
keep
an eye on each
other
. The
community
is held
together by a
communitarian
attitude.
"
We all know each
other
here,
"
Lauren's
father
explains
,
"
and we rely on each other
"
(Parable of the Sower, 31).
As a result
, Butler provides militaristic
"
privatopia
"
as one model of an ideal
society
. To
describe
modern
privatopia
, McKenzie contends that we
must
return to the United States of America, in a socioeconomic
situation
defined by the loss of the welfare state in the jaws of rampant late capitalism. The word
"
privatopia
"
was
used
in
North
American literature to designate any exclusive urban development apart from the public environment. In the final three decades of the twentieth century, the concept of political cohesion vanished
quickly
. (McKenzie, 1994) While the importance of money is
gradually
increasing,
people
who
cannot even afford water are starting to not
buy
gasoline for their vehicles and tools, which causes a decrease in the price of gasoline.
However
, no one drives unless it is
absolutely
necessary
because
they
have to
think
of themselves
first
: “No one I know
uses
a gas-powered car, truck, or cycle. Vehicles like that are rusting in driveways and
being cannibalized
for metal and plastic. It's a lot harder to give up water” (18). Apart from that, they have the last remaining
Yannis
Family screen: “window wall television. ” Thanks to this, they are
sometimes
aware of the
news
,
but
one day, when the
news
of astronauts from space was
given
, the peer darkened and is not working again. In the
book
, much of society's collapse seems to be due to environmental destruction, economic and political destruction, followed by financial problems, and this trio (politics, economy, and environmental problems) brings about the
end
of humanity. As polluted water and air, venomous chemicals, failed pharmaceutical and scientific experiments resulted in
dangerously
addictive drugs,
people
moved
from being
human
to having animal instincts. Corporations which prevailed certain sectors of
society
and provided protection and infrastructure to those
who
can afford it,
kept
poor
people
away from protection and infrastructure. With the punitive debt policies’ coming to
modern
lives
that damage individuals, benefited corporations are
being introduced
as part of this process. The Parable of the Sower,
in particular
, focuses on two fundamental paths to
modern
utopia:
first
, the implementation of bureaucratic logic to socioeconomic issues through the agency of the state; and second, the formation of
communities
of 'them' and 'us' through racial politics (Phillips). The master pattern of racial
thinking
has
largely
controlled the meaning of
human
variety in the contemporary
age
, with catastrophic implications. As Lauren travels across the
"
crazy,
"
"
desperate,
"
and
"
dangerous
"
world
of the
future
, the novel foregrounds an
old
American fantasy: a race war. That vision
is played
out
"
on the street
"
in Butler's novel, where
"
people
were
expected
to fear and hate everyone
but
their
own
kind
"
(31). Lauren's
Books
of the
Living
make
a compelling case for the value of a transcending awareness, which
sees
hope in the most hopeless of
seemingly
imprisoned conditions.
"
I don't write Utopian science fiction
because
I don't believe that imperfect
humans
can form a perfect
society
,
"
Butler has stated (
qtd
. in
Beal
14). Butler's treatment of the concept of
change
in
post-Fordism
focuses on the social and political consequences arising from rejections of narratives (
Nilges
, 4). With the
post-Fordism
the increase in vehicles, pollution of the environment and the
situation
they are in
drastically
has
changed
. Jerry Phillips applauds Butler's endorsement of the primacy of
change
, which demonstrates a critical knowledge of history's dialectical process and predicts
future
potentiality without reverting to
"
simple
determinisms
,
"
resulting in a
new
"
ethics of Being
"
(302).
Change
is no longer an ideal that promises to escape the constraints of traditional systems.
Instead
,
change
has become the central logic of our
post-Fordist
day; where the emancipatory demands of postmodern culture and theory
are met
,
but
with a
different
outcome than
originally
expected
. The emancipatory promise that postmodern culture awaits in describing the
future
and a changing present has manifested itself as nothing more than the basic logic of
post-Fordist
capitalism in contemporary or
post-Fordist
culture (
Nilges
, 5).
"
God is
change
,
"
Lauren says (15). Butler's preoccupation with immortality in historical narrative, the way that time speaks to the emergence of hidden possibilities in the universe,
is brought
to the fore by the statement that
"
God is
change
.
"
Change
, or God, in Lauren's opinion, has no required direction and is free of anthropomorphic attributes such as
good
and evil.
Change
has both
positive
and
negative
sides; it is inevitable. The dilemma of
future
potential
worlds
is confronted
when trying to fathom the universe in continual motion.
That is
to say, one
must
study the circumstances in which a
future
perception becomes
concretely
realized as social reality. Lauren believes that we shape
change
and
change
forms us,
rather
than the
other
way. Lauren's
ideas
led her to create
Earthseed
, a
new
religion
and ethics of being. The
book
is a postmodern text
because
it depicts
people
who
see
themselves in an
ideologic
and postmodern
situation
.
Wanzo
explains
this
situation
as “a
postrevolutionary
period of consciousness surrounding political movements dealing with racial and sexual discrimination, colonialism,
class
oppression, religious fundamentalism, and environmental
dangers
,
as well
as the
end
of
many
modern
technological innovations that
are dismantled
in apocalyptic circumstances” (74). The challenges of those
who
work
simply
to survive and have anything, the life that has fallen on them, and the pictures of violence are all recounted in great detail. These, I believe, are a reflection of how far
society
has sunk in their
current
new
world
; they are
described
to
explain
what individuals might become in such a scenario and how they can deviate from being
human
. The Parable of the Sower, as an exercise in
utopianism
following the
end
of Utopia, links itself with both prophetic and postmodern
ideas
. On the one hand, the novel rejects the notion that
metanarratives
are unnecessary:
metanarratives
provide
human
action psychological force and ethical direction. In their absence, the individual is all too willing to participate in barbaric social behaviors that appear to be eternal necessity (Phillips). The notion of
change
, when viewed as the driving force of the universe, leads to a
dialec
-
tical
understanding of reality. David Harvey claims that
"
dialectical
thinking
emphasizes the understanding of processes, flows, fluxes, and relations over the analysis of elements, things, structures, and organized systems
"
(49) This intersection of
religion
, logical
thinking
, and scientific advancement in the twenty-
first
century indicates that
modern
interpretations of historical writings can provide the basis for
human
existence (
Ruffin
).
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