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Many countries are still facing problems regarding a huge population. To control the ever increasing population many people believe that Government can control the population through taxes. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many countries are still facing problems regarding a huge population. To control the ever increasing population many people believe that Government can control the population through taxes. with this opinion? pQOy0
Huge population has of many countries. a big problems nowadays To Contral the increasing population most of people claim the the authority can control the population through taxes! I disagree "The statement because. it increase The difference between rich and poor and the economic of country. significantly Tax 15. not best way to Control population because such became rich and popr. become more poor. In other words, weathly people enough money, this case have to pay highon tax but not in boor people because they hardly earn to some survival and even they monly to d not have to buy food some time, of they bay higher tax, poor people cansat survival because they unable be purchase it. For example, the headline of the newspaper "The Tribune' showed that 50 of poor people died in USA due to heaple higher tax! Most of the panor have take the lean from the bank a time they lean to the facticed to bay the higher tox after are to fry bank so that they sucide themself. Impare the higher tax Chana to decrease the Cconomics the country. This means that, individuals in the buy anythings market which lead to (exect basic things "because of inflations decrease the of the Country. Country fack alots of problems like and people read to increase do strike decrease the that government should On poverty the tax so police to Control the overpopulation such educatie the about Change the fecople and time problems of the lation and Organise various camp in the part of the country. For instance, Asa article published by VK government showed that the the ecomonil Country drop significant because the government Thigh tax economic of allow which effect of the The country the In conclusion, Imposing tax is not right way "Control the overpopulation because the between poor and rich people increase and the boundary face slot of challe problems like the rise poverty.
Huge
population
has of
many
countries
.
a
big
problems
nowadays To
Contral
the increasing
population
most of
people
claim
the the
authority can control the
population
through
taxes
! I disagree
"
The statement
because
.
it
increase
The difference between rich and
poor
and the economic of
country
.
significantly
Tax 15.
not best
way to Control
population
because
such became rich and
popr
.
become
more
poor
.
In other words
,
weathly
people
enough
money, this case
have to
pay
highon
tax
but
not in boor
people
because
they hardly earn to
some
survival and even they
monly
to d not
have to
buy
food
some
time, of they bay higher
tax
,
poor
people
cansat
survival
because
they unable be
purchase
it.
For example
, the headline of the newspaper
"
The Tribune'
showed
that 50 of
poor
people
died
in USA
due to
heaple
higher
tax
! Most of the
panor
have
take
the lean from the bank a time they lean to the
facticed
to bay the higher
tox
after are to fry bank
so
that they
sucide
themself
.
Impare
the higher
tax
Chana
to decrease the
Cconomics
the
country
. This means that, individuals in the
buy
anythings market which lead to
(
exect
basic things
"
because
of
inflations
decrease the of the
Country
.
Country
fack
alots
of
problems
like and
people
read to increase do strike decrease the that
government
should On poverty the
tax
so
police to Control the overpopulation such
educatie
the about
Change
the
fecople
and time
problems
of the
lation
and
Organise
various camp in the part of the
country
.
For instance
,
Asa
article published by
VK
government
showed
that
the the
ecomonil
Country
drop significant
because
the
government
Thigh
tax
economic of
allow
which effect of
the The
country
the
In conclusion
, Imposing
tax
is not
right
way
"
Control the overpopulation
because
the between
poor
and rich
people
increase and the boundary face slot of
challe
problems
like the rise poverty.
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