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In spite of many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In spite of many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace? E5gAD
In recent years, gender-based inequality in the workplace has been a much-discussed topic. In spite of many advances that women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. I believe this is largely due to the influence of traditional values regarding a woman's place in the family, not just from their own parents but also from society in general. While women’s participation in the workforce has increased over the past few decades, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. Many people argue that a gender-neutral approach is all that’s needed to minimize discrimination, but this isn’t the case. Men and women are different: most obviously, we have different hormones and genetic profiles, but also different professional preferences. For example, women tend to prefer part-time work and children bring added responsibilities that men rarely have. In today's world, the economy plays a much more significant role in everyone's lives. This is why I support the idea that pay and promotion should promote equality of opportunity for women and men in the workplace. Equality of opportunity for men and women has been a long-standing issue. Though access to education and career choices have improved over the last few decades, promotion and pay still remain important issues in need of attention. To promote equality, laws and education/training must be implemented to encourage hiring managers, as well as employees, to embrace cultural differences in the workplace. In recent years, gender equality has been a popular topic due to the fact that much gender bias has been observed in society. That is why there are many views on what should be done to promote equal opportunities for men and women in the workplace. The primary solution is the implementation of equal pay for equal work legislation by governments. With this in mind, I agree with those who believe it is important to focus on this issue rather than just on promoting better education or childcare. Human civilization, has progressed through the hard work of great philosophers and scientists, in the process creating a lot of excitement and fascination. As part of this process, human society has made some wonderful strides in science, education and the workplace for both men and women. However, men continue to outnumber women at all levels of pay and promotion. I will begin by offering two reasons for this state of affairs. there are a number of ways in which women can improve career prospects in the modern world, and these range from applying for jobs previously seen as male domains to changing societal attitudes. As long as men and women are equally qualified, they should be equally considered for advancement opportunities. While many advances have been made, sometimes an unacceptable double standard still prevails. As a professional woman who is also the mother of two young girls, I hope to continue being a role model who demonstrates that both men and women should have an equal opportunity to advance in the workplace. Men and women in the workplace have continued to be at odds with regard to equal opportunity, even after many technological advances. A remedy would be for employers to provide leadership development programs that allow men and women to learn about one another's contributions in a work setting. Women now make up just over half the workforce. In spite of this and other advances, there are still too many governments and private organisations that apparently support gender equality but pay lip service to it at best. Wherever possible, large companies with well-paid CEOs should be encouraged to follow the example of those that insist on employing an equal number of men and women at every level in the organisation, making sure that if any senior jobs are cut during a downturn, they have a rough 50/50 balance. It might also be worth considering imposing a kind of positive discrimination in favour of women in the selection process for cutting-edge research projects. However, some industries are so male-dominated that women's views about how things could be done differently are often overlooked. One solution could be for rival companies in such industries as export and engineering to study what job changes got more women into senior positions when it was tried in countries such as Sweden. Women might be happier working for company A where they know that their ideas will get a fair hearing rather than company B where they may feel ignored even if they are paid more. Getting equal pay is a key part of any solution but we must not forget that ideals such as freedom and equality should never be compromised. As the world develop and transform into a more modern place, women have been going through an increasing advantageous situation. However, they are still faced with challenges of wage gap and opportunities that might influence their working lives. In my view, there are several ways to lower these barriers in order to maintain equal opportunities for men and women in workplace. Essay discusses the advantages and disadvantages of having a unified, international legislation which would establish some shared values in order to achieve equal opportunities, taking into account that there are cultural differences and benefits to be gained by this diversity.
In recent years, gender-based inequality in the
workplace
has been a much-discussed topic.
In spite of
many
advances that
women
have made in
education
and employment, they
continue
to be at a disadvantage when it
comes
to
pay
and promotion. I believe this is
largely
due to the influence of traditional values regarding a woman's place in the family, not
just
from their
own
parents
but
also
from society
in general
. While
women’s
participation in the workforce has increased over the past few decades, they
continue
to be at a disadvantage when it
comes
to
pay
and promotion.
Many
people
argue that a gender-neutral approach is all that’s needed to minimize discrimination,
but
this isn’t the case.
Men
and
women
are
different
: most
obviously
, we have
different
hormones and genetic profiles,
but
also
different
professional preferences.
For example
,
women
tend to prefer part-time
work
and children bring
added
responsibilities that
men
rarely have. In
today
's world, the economy plays a much more significant role in everyone's
lives
. This is why I support the
idea
that
pay
and promotion should promote
equality
of
opportunity
for
women
and
men
in the workplace. Equality of
opportunity
for
men
and
women
has been a long-standing issue. Though access to
education
and career choices have
improved
over the last few decades, promotion and
pay
still
remain
important
issues in need of attention. To promote
equality
, laws and education/training
must
be implemented
to encourage hiring managers,
as well
as employees, to embrace cultural differences in the workplace. In recent years, gender
equality
has been a popular topic due to the fact that much gender bias has
been observed
in society.
That is
why there are
many
views on what should
be done
to promote
equal
opportunities
for
men
and
women
in the
workplace
. The primary solution is the implementation of
equal
pay
for
equal
work
legislation by
governments
. With this in mind, I
agree
with those who believe it is
important
to focus on this issue
rather
than
just
on promoting better
education
or childcare. Human civilization, has progressed through the
hard
work
of great philosophers and scientists, in the process creating
a lot of
excitement and fascination. As part of this process, human society has made
some
wonderful strides in science,
education
and the
workplace
for both
men
and
women
.
However
,
men
continue
to outnumber
women
at all levels of
pay
and promotion. I will
begin
by offering two reasons for this state of affairs.
there
are a number of ways in which
women
can
improve
career prospects in the modern world, and these range from applying for jobs previously
seen
as male domains to changing societal attitudes. As long as
men
and
women
are
equally
qualified, they should be
equally
considered for advancement
opportunities
. While
many
advances have
been made
,
sometimes
an unacceptable double standard
still
prevails. As a professional woman who is
also
the mother of two young girls, I hope to
continue
being a role model who demonstrates that both
men
and
women
should have an
equal
opportunity
to advance in the workplace.
Men
and
women
in the
workplace
have continued to be at odds with regard to
equal
opportunity
, even after
many
technological advances. A remedy would be for employers to provide leadership development programs that
allow
men
and
women
to learn about one another's contributions in a
work
setting. Women
now
make
up
just
over half the workforce.
In spite of
this and other advances, there are
still
too
many
governments
and private
organisations
that
apparently
support gender
equality
but
pay
lip service to it at best. Wherever possible, large
companies
with well-paid CEOs should
be encouraged
to follow the example of those that insist on employing an
equal
number of
men
and
women
at every level in the
organisation
, making sure that if any senior jobs are
cut
during a downturn, they have a rough 50/50 balance. It might
also
be worth considering imposing a kind of
positive
discrimination in
favour
of
women
in the selection process for cutting-edge research projects.
However
,
some
industries are
so
male-dominated that women's views about how things could
be done
differently
are
often
overlooked. One solution could be for rival
companies
in such industries as export and engineering to study what job
changes
got
more
women
into senior positions when it
was tried
in countries such as Sweden.
Women
might be happier working for
company
A where they know that their
ideas
will
get
a
fair
hearing
rather
than
company
B where they may feel
ignored
even if they
are paid
more. Getting
equal
pay
is a key part of any solution
but
we
must
not forget that ideals such as freedom and
equality
should never
be compromised
. As the world develop and transform into a more modern place,
women
have been going through an increasing advantageous situation.
However
, they are
still
faced with challenges of wage gap and
opportunities
that might influence their working
lives
. In my view, there are several ways to lower these barriers in order to maintain
equal
opportunities
for
men
and
women
in workplace. Essay discusses the advantages and disadvantages of having a unified, international legislation which would establish
some
shared values in order to achieve
equal
opportunities
, taking into account that there are cultural differences and benefits to
be gained
by this diversity.
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