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In some countries the population is ageing and birth rate is decline how will this effect society how it can be pervented

In some countries the population is ageing and birth rate is decline how will this effect society how it can be pervented Gle
Nowdays, it can be observed that in many republics proportion of grey hair people has increase rapidly. Whereas, individual are not intrested to get child and there is a decreament in the rate of birth. There are some reason behind this treand but the most notable though are hamper the economy. However this can be mitigate by some sagacious measure by governmentThe most prominent reason is, it obstruct the economy if there are no youngster in the society. Then it is very daunting task to do work properly and efficently also if the work is not done on time with good outcome then there is no profit at all. As youngster has more inovative ideas as compare to elder one's. Moreover, if any company do not have profit then they will not able ro pay taxes. Absence of taxer cause bery bad impact on nations economy and through this company will not grow. To cite an example, a survey was conduct in Japan in the year 2015by world health organisation that japan is at first place in the growing number of elder aged people due to which the gross domestic product was least as compared to australia. thus, this is the main reason behind this development. To tackle this situation, government should spread awareness among the public by organizing seminars and give knowledge about importance of having a children so that individual of the communities encourage to have juviniles toward people such as if any one has 2 and 3 child they should provided free education to childern and also provide mid day meal to childern as well as job opportunities after graduations. To exemplify, i have witnessed a report on hindustan times which shows that In finaland authorities provide all these facilities which had a positive result. Hence, this is the main solution behind this phenomeno. To recapitulate this, there are some causation behind this trend but the most pertinent though are obstruct the economy which can be resolved by few efforts of government
Nowdays
, it can
be observed
that in
many
republics proportion of
grey
hair
people
has
increase
rapidly
. Whereas, individual are not
intrested
to
get
child and there is a
decreament
in the rate of birth. There are
some
reason behind this
treand
but
the most notable though are hamper the
economy
.
However
this can be
mitigate
by
some
sagacious measure by
governmentThe
most prominent reason is, it
obstruct
the
economy
if there are no
youngster
in the society. Then it is
very
daunting task to do work
properly
and
efficently
also
if the work is not done on time with
good
outcome then there is no profit at all. As youngster has more
inovative
ideas
as compare to elder one's.
Moreover
, if any
company
do not have profit then they will not able
ro
pay taxes. Absence of taxer cause
bery
bad
impact on nations
economy
and through this
company
will not grow. To cite an example, a survey was conduct in Japan in the year 2015by world health
organisation
that japan is at
first
place in the growing number of elder aged
people
due to which the gross domestic product was least as compared to
australia
.
thus
, this is the main reason behind this development. To tackle this situation,
government
should spread awareness among the public by organizing seminars and give knowledge about importance of having a children
so
that individual of the communities encourage to have
juviniles
toward
people
such as if
any one
has 2 and 3
child
they should
provided
free education to
childern
and
also
provide
mid day
meal to
childern
as well
as job opportunities after graduations. To exemplify,
i
have witnessed a report on
hindustan
times which
shows
that In
finaland
authorities provide all these facilities which had a
positive
result.
Hence
, this is the main solution behind this
phenomeno
. To recapitulate this, there are
some
causation behind this trend
but
the most pertinent though are
obstruct
the
economy
which can
be resolved
by few efforts of
government
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IELTS essay In some countries the population is ageing and birth rate is decline how will this effect society how it can be pervented

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