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In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway line for very fast train between city others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport discuss both this view and give your own opinion

In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway line for very fast train between city others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport discuss both this view and give your own opinion AmxbN

Improvement of public transportation is popular topic between people. There are 2 different ideas about transportation in some countries in one hand group of people argued that it's necessary to invest money for building new fast train way between city, in other hand there is another group that are believed to spend money to rebuild and extend endure transport. In my opinion new technological transport can help community more than exist transport system. This is a will discuss about merit and demerit of both groups. Public transport system has important role in any society, it's necessary to keeping up transport knowledge to have modern country. According to people group one which are discussed about put money into built up new Train way, it has a lot of benefit such as community can concern on main new transport, in addition new train has extra facility in company is extra facility in compare by exist system. According to local society researcher this kind of train has been replaced by all systems then it has saved a lot of time during the day, cause they usually locate train middle of the crowded city. Secondly there is another viewpoint that are discussed to spend a more money to exist transport system for improving this system, They believe it can prevent wasting money on new transport system like train, therefore it's accessable by people to reach present stop. For example elderly people have known bus stop in their neighbor from last decade while young people cannot afford to pay extra money to reach new stops. In other hand renovation of all transport system can cause some problem like engineering work in middle of peak time so it can increase traffic crush. In my opinion the developing of all transport system Cost a lot of money, in addition it's not add any new facility, although replacing new transport system has extra option to save more money instead of getting stuck in traffic for plenty hour. To conclusion, it's perfect idea to improve local transport service although they have to prevent extra problem wide rebuilding system in other hand build new transport system have more option for member of community.

Improvement of public transportation is popular topic between people
. There are 2 different
ideas
 about transportation in some
 countries in one hand
group
 of people
 argued that it's
 necessary to invest money
 for building new
fast
train
 way between city, in other hand
 there is another group
 that are believed
 to spend money
 to rebuild and extend endure transport
. In my opinion new
 technological transport
 can help
 community more than exist transport
system
. This is a will discuss about merit and demerit of both groups
. Public transport
system
 has important
 role in any society, it's
 necessary to keeping up transport
 knowledge to have modern country. According to people
group
 one which are discussed
 about put money
 into built up new
Train
 way, it has a lot of
 benefit such as community can concern on main new
transport
, in addition
new
train
 has extra
 facility in company
 is extra
 facility in compare by exist system
. According to local society researcher this kind of train
 has been replaced
 by all systems
 then it has saved a lot of
 time during the day, cause they usually
 locate train
 middle of the crowded city. Secondly
 there is another viewpoint that are discussed
 to spend a more money
 to exist transport
system
 for improving this system
, They believe it can prevent
 wasting money
 on new
transport
system
 like train
, therefore
it's
 accessable by people
 to reach present stop
. For example
 elderly people
 have known bus stop
 in their neighbor from last decade while young people
 cannot afford to pay extra
money
 to reach new
stops
. In other hand
 renovation of all transport
system
 can cause some
 problem like engineering work in middle of peak time so
 it can increase traffic crush.

In my opinion the developing of all transport
system
 Cost a lot of
money
, in addition
it's
 not add
 any new
 facility, although replacing new
transport
system
 has extra
 option to save more money
instead
 of getting stuck in traffic for plenty
 hour. To conclusion, it's
 perfect idea
 to improve
 local transport
 service although they have to
prevent
extra
 problem wide rebuilding system
 in other hand
 build new
transport
system
 have more option for member of community. 

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IELTS essay In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway line for very fast train between city others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport discuss both this view and give your own opinion

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