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A glance at the provided map above demostrate of considerable transform since 1920 to today of Grand Park.

A glance at the provided map above demostrate of considerable transform since 1920 to today of Grand Park. 29ly6
Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that the park jointed and enlarged territories chiefly rolated to amusement including a larger stage and various areas for relaxtion. There was also important transform in terms of seating and the only places that remained the same were the entering and one minor garden. The most astonishing transform in the middle of the park where the fountain has been removed in favour of a flowers garden with full seating around it. To the west of the new garden, The primary stage for musicians has been altered into a much larger ampitheatre facing the opposite side that will allow for concerts in the park. This transform has necessitate the removal of both seating on the far left direction well as the rose garden in the lower east corner of the picture. The entrance at the upper and bottom in the centre have stayed permanented but on the east direction a cafe has replaced the rose garden and where there was a pond for water plants in the top right corner, there is nowadays a children's play area. Instead of the pond, a water feature has been construct living the bottom east corner. Ultimately, leading to the water park is a new entrance for an underground car park.
Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is
readily
apparent that the
park
jointed and enlarged territories
chiefly
rolated to amusement including a larger stage and various areas for relaxtion. There was
also
important
transform in terms of seating and the
only
places that remained the same were the entering and one minor garden. The most astonishing transform in the middle of the
park
where the fountain has
been removed
in favour of a flowers
garden
with full seating around it. To the west of the new
garden
, The primary stage for musicians has
been altered
into a much larger ampitheatre facing the opposite side that will
allow
for concerts in the
park
. This transform has necessitate the removal of both seating on the far
left
direction well as the rose
garden
in the lower east corner of the picture. The entrance at the upper and bottom in the centre have stayed permanented
but
on the east direction a cafe has replaced the rose
garden
and where there was a pond for water plants in the top right corner, there is nowadays a children's play area.
Instead
of the pond, a water feature has been construct living the bottom east corner.
Ultimately
, leading to the water
park
is a new entrance for an underground car
park
.
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