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A critique of the artcle 'Always Connected' by Alison Murphy

A critique of the artcle 'Always Connected' by Alison Murphy BpGKj

First of all, I'm against Alison Murphy's main points. In my opinion, switching off our devices is not the best choice. Not only could you miss urgent calls, but you will also plug away at your phone as soon as you turn it on. In Addition, I disagree with Murphy when she argues that because of technological advances, we are working more. From my point of view, the more technology advances, the less work we have to do. Finally, I wouldn't switch my devices off and I suppose technologies make us more productive at work. On the other hand, I agree with the rest of Murphy's points. She is right when she points out that a majority of people use their devices right before sleeping. I always use a device before going to bed. Moreover, she makes a good point about technology's interfering with our leisure time. As Murphy explained, we are endlessly on call during our leisure time since technology invites our work into our private lives. For instance, my father is always answering calls at malls instead of talking to people who are in front of him. That is why she's right when she states, "technology appears to be reducing the face-to-face human interaction. " Besides, she is absolutely right about the shallowness of online posts and messages. Due to technological limits, online interactions are nowhere near as satisfying as in-person interactions. Finally, I think we ought to meet each other in person instead of calling or texting each other.

First
 of all, I'm against Alison Murphy's main points
. In my opinion, switching off our devices
 is not the best choice. Not only
 could you miss urgent calls, but
 you will also
 plug away at your phone as soon
 as you turn it on. In Addition
, I disagree with Murphy when she argues that because
 of technological advances, we are working more. From my point
 of view, the more technology
 advances, the less work we have to
 do. Finally
, I wouldn't switch my devices
 off and I suppose technologies
make
 us more productive at work.

On the other hand
, I agree
 with the rest of Murphy's points
. She is right
 when she points
 out that a majority of people
use
 their devices
right
before
 sleeping. I always use
 a device
before
 going to bed. Moreover
, she makes
 a good
point
 about technology's interfering with our leisure time. As Murphy explained
, we are endlessly
 on call during our leisure time since technology
 invites our work into our private lives
. For instance
, my father is always answering calls at malls instead
 of talking to people
 who are in front of him. That is
 why she's right
 when she states, "technology
 appears to be reducing the face-to-face human interaction. " Besides
, she is absolutely
right
 about the shallowness of online posts and messages. Due to technological limits, online interactions are nowhere near as satisfying as in-person interactions. Finally
, I think
 we ought to meet
 each other in person instead
 of calling or texting each other. 

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