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you and your family visit the local shopping mall every week. However, it has become more and more difficult to find a parking spot recently. You would like to let the shopping mall manager know about this problem.

To: vishalmall654@yahoo. ca
From: raman776@yahoo. ca
Subject: Regarding park problem
Dear sir/mam,
I Would like to talk about the parking as this mall is very near to my home so I always prefer to come here. But from last six months I notice a issue related parking. Firstly, this lot is very busy people cannot get space easily because some people just spend their time without any reason. As well as school is near to this mall so teachers and some students also park their vehicles here.
Because of less parking slots some people need to park their vehicles on the road. Sometime we need to come by using Public transports so folks facing lot of trouble.
I would like to suggest their should be timing for every parson like one person can stay only two hours in a mall and should not give permission to stay in a park without any cause security man can keep an eye on every person easily. Secondly, School teachers should not allow to park their vehicles in this park. According to me, this steps will be helpful for solving these issues.
Thankyou.
Regards- Raman
To: vishalmall654@yahoo.
ca


From: raman776@yahoo.
ca


Subject: Regarding park
problem


Dear sir/mam,

I Would like to talk about the parking as this mall is
very
near to my home
so
I always prefer to
come
here.
But
from last six months I notice
a
issue related parking.
Firstly
, this lot is
very
busy people cannot
get
space
easily
because
some
people
just
spend their time without any reason.
As well
as school is near to this mall
so
teachers and
some
students
also
park their vehicles here.

Because
of less parking slots
some
people need to park their vehicles on the road. Sometime we need to
come
by using Public transports
so
folks facing
lot of
trouble.

I would like to suggest
their
should
be timing for every parson like one person can stay
only
two hours in a mall and
should
not give permission to stay in a park without any cause security
man
can
keep
an eye on every person
easily
.
Secondly
, School teachers
should
not
allow
to park their vehicles in this park.
According to me
, this steps will be helpful for solving these issues.

Thankyou
.

Regards-
Raman

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