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Personal Statement for studying abroad.

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Hi everyone, this is Sharon Cyrus, 20 years old boy from the little town of Sindh Pakistan. I have recently completed high school and I live along with my parents, 3 siblings, and grandparents. My dad is a full-time pastor and generously works for God in Pakistan. He runs the church and a free-of-charge little school for underprivileged children, where approximately 60 children are being taught by 2 teachers. However, we have planned to expand it because there are still more than 200 children who can't afford education and we want to reach them in the future as God has put into my heart to a big school in that area where they can get a quality education without even paying a single penny. I have taken the step with faith to get higher education in Canada4, so that is could able to apply world-renowned Canadian education system measures in that area where people feel that they could never be able to make their children educated in good schools. I believe in God that he will provide me all the necessary financial aid and support from his people who always intend to help others, as Jesus would help. My parents can't afford it because my dad is not a paid pastor. Likewise, I believe God will put into your heart to help me study abroad at the University of John Wilson which is located in Montreal, Quebec Canada. I need to apply fa or a session in May and your help will be highly appreciated. So far, I have done the IELTS exam preparation classes which were paid for by Jane who lives in the USA. Here I want to share a very blessed testimony with all of you, that we had nothing when I applied for the preparation classes and it was the step by faith because something was push me to today that and eventually, I did then God sent jane to help me for the preparation fees. Praise God and I believe he will help me further because it is his plan and he want me to get higher education so that is could be able to transfer it to other people who can't afford to study. One thing which my dad tells me every time and he says I shouldn't see their pocket but see the fathers pocket, who is the provider of everything and if he seriously wants you to study abroad then nothing can prevent you, as it has written in the bible that "where God guides, he provides"( ISAIAH 58: 11). I strongly believe that God will use his people to help me, as he has shown me this path.
Hi everyone, this is Sharon Cyrus, 20 years
old
boy from the
little
town of
Sindh
Pakistan. I have recently completed high
school
and I
live
along with my parents, 3 siblings, and grandparents. My dad is a full-time pastor and
generously
works for God in Pakistan. He runs the church and a free-of-charge
little
school
for underprivileged
children
, where approximately 60
children
are
being taught
by 2 teachers.
However
, we have planned to expand it
because
there are
still
more than 200
children
who
can't afford
education and
we
want
to reach them in the future as God has put into my heart to a
big
school
in that area where they can
get
a quality
education
without even paying a single penny. I have taken the step with faith to
get
higher
education
in Canada4,
so
that
is
could able
to apply world-renowned Canadian
education
system measures in that area where
people
feel that they could never be able to
make
their
children
educated in
good
schools
. I
believe
in God that he will provide me all the necessary financial aid and support from his
people
who
always intend to
help
others, as Jesus would
help
. My parents can't afford it
because
my dad is not a paid pastor.
Likewise
, I
believe
God will put into your heart to
help
me study abroad at the University of John Wilson which
is located
in Montreal, Quebec Canada. I need to apply fa or a session in May and your
help
will be
highly
appreciated.
So
far, I have done the IELTS exam preparation classes which
were paid
for by Jane
who
lives
in the USA. Here I
want
to share a
very
blessed testimony with all of you, that we had nothing when I applied for the preparation classes and it was the step by faith
because
something was push me to
today
that and
eventually
, I did then God
sent
jane
to
help
me for the preparation fees. Praise God and I
believe
he will
help
me
further
because
it is his
plan and
he
want
me to
get
higher
education
so
that
is
could be able to transfer it to other
people
who
can't afford to study. One thing which my dad
tells
me every
time and
he says I shouldn't
see
their pocket
but
see
the fathers pocket,
who
is the provider of everything and if he
seriously
wants
you to study abroad then nothing can
prevent
you, as it has written in the bible that
"
where God guides, he provides
"
(
ISAIAH 58: 11). I
strongly
believe
that God will
use
his
people
to
help
me, as he has shown me this path.
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