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Dear madam, Hope you and your family are in good health and this is a good time to send you an email regardless your many other important priorities that you have to take care of. The issue I want to raise here is regarding the advertisement I have looked in an American magazine for care-taker of a child. The reason of applying for this job is that I have done my previous study in early childcare and health, moreover as being a student of early childhood I know how to take care and monetize children with their daily routine as well as their health. I am more friendly with children and have been working with an institution before where I have been taught how to take care of a small child. As of my free time I will be engaging myself by reading some books or reading magazine, moreover I would love to play mobile games on my leisure time. I hope you will consider me a perfect candidate after reviewing my qualifications as well as my interest toward my job opportunity. Your faithfully,
Dear madam, Hope you and your family are in
good
health and this is a
good
time to
send you an email
regardless your
many
other
important
priorities that you
have to
take care of. The issue I want to raise here is regarding the advertisement I have looked in an American magazine for care-taker of a child. The reason of applying for this job is that I have done my previous study in early childcare and health,
moreover
as being a student of early childhood I know how to take care and monetize children with their daily routine
as well
as their health. I am more friendly with children and have been working with an institution
before
where I have
been taught
how to take care of a
small
child. As of my free time I will be engaging myself by reading
some
books or reading magazine,
moreover
I would
love
to play mobile games on my leisure time. I hope you will consider me a perfect candidate after reviewing my qualifications
as well
as my interest toward my job opportunity.
Your
faithfully
,
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