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Whether or not someone achieve their aims is mostly a question of luck.Agree?

How a person gets success is a matter of great discussion, but peoples opinions differ as to Whether is achieved by luck or not. I’m in complete disagreement with the situation because other factors make an outstanding contribution to achieving the target, out of which strong dedication and sweetness foods are major.
To begin with, various factors ideal why I deeply suspect the notion of deciding look as a key to success. First and foremost, a person can achieve successfully but he has thought of only by showing great willingness to overcome any difficulty. This is because continue efforts are often the deciding factor And it does not matter how many times a person has made such attempts. Take Thompson Edison as an example, who kept on trying to invent the light bulb unless or until he was able to generate light from it, and in this case, his endeavours well not a few, but countless. Secondly being industrious towards attaining a realistic goal is off at most important which means if one has no strong desire, and evades once hardships, it is less likely that alone will get the victory. To cite an example, Elon Musk the founder of Tesla company, has carved a niche in advanced technology by inventing autonomous vehicles, but it would not be possible, had he not showed enthusiasm in terms of working hard.
However, the other view is widely held because of a few reasons. One of these reasons is that most people have remarkable achievement because of their fortune only. This might be because of the world that they have inherited from their forefathers, and emerged as ultimate victorious. Akash Ambani, the son of Mukesh Ambani, the richest person of India, has nothing done to come on the list of a highly successful entrepreneur, but this has been possible only because of his in ancestors’ money.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that being fortunate is a key to success because a person with a strong determination and the ability to do hard work can achieve whatever he wants to.
How a person
gets
success is a matter of great discussion,
but
peoples opinions differ
as to Whether
is achieved
by luck or not. I’m in complete disagreement with the situation because other factors
make
an outstanding contribution to achieving the target, out of which strong dedication and sweetness foods are major.

To
begin
with, various factors ideal why I
deeply
suspect the notion of deciding look as a key to success.
First
and foremost, a person can achieve
successfully
but
he has
thought
of only by showing great willingness to overcome any difficulty. This is because continue efforts are
often
the deciding factor And it does not matter how
many
times a person has made such attempts. Take Thompson Edison as an example, who
kept
on trying to invent the light bulb unless or until he was able to generate light from it, and
in this case
, his
endeavours
well not a few,
but
countless.
Secondly
being industrious towards attaining a realistic goal is off at most
important
which means if one has no strong desire, and evades once hardships, it is less likely that alone will
get
the victory. To cite an example, Elon Musk the founder of Tesla
company
, has carved a niche in advanced technology by inventing autonomous vehicles,
but
it would not be possible, had he not
showed
enthusiasm in terms of working
hard
.

However
, the other view is
widely
held because of a few reasons. One of these reasons is that most
people
have remarkable achievement because of their fortune only. This might be because of the world that they have inherited from their forefathers, and emerged as ultimate victorious. Akash
Ambani
, the son of Mukesh
Ambani
, the richest person of India, has nothing done to
come
on the list of a
highly
successful entrepreneur,
but
this has been possible only because of his in ancestors’ money.

In conclusion
, I completely disagree that being fortunate is a key to success because a person with a strong determination and the ability to do
hard
work can achieve whatever he wants to.

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