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The situation after returning home

As I mentioned in my previous essays, we took back our lands from the enemy. That is why we are all proud due to this victory. We know that everything will alter. Our government are planning to take novel plans in the quarter of Nagorno-Karabakh. It is going to penetrate those areas to make life easier for the people who are thinking to return there. Besides that, it will be beneficial for the country as well. Now, we can pierce the minerals, as well as sell them to foreign countries to earn money. However, we ought to comprehend that those minerals are not renewable and deplete them. Considering this fact, we should be cautious when we use those minerals.
Since we took back the lands, lots of big companies that are trying to build new buildings, factories, etc. there. Government wants to avoid giving the projects to them due to their monopolistic behavior. They want to depict their ideas thoroughly and comprehensive to the authority to go to Nagorno-Karabakh.
Right now, the CEOs, CFOs, presidents of giant companies want to occupy the land to make more money. On the contrary, they ought not to forget the fact that as long as they can earn money, it is because of the heroism of the our martyrs who had slender figures.
As I mentioned in my previous essays, we took back our lands from the enemy.
That is
why we are all proud due to this victory. We know that everything will alter. Our
government
are planning to take novel plans in the quarter of Nagorno-Karabakh. It is going to penetrate those areas to
make
life easier for the
people
who are thinking to return there.
Besides
that, it will be beneficial for the country
as well
.
Now
, we can pierce the minerals,
as well
as sell them to foreign countries to earn money.
However
, we ought to comprehend that those minerals are not renewable and deplete them. Considering this fact, we should be cautious when we
use
those minerals.

Since we took back the lands, lots of
big
companies
that are trying to build new buildings, factories, etc. there.
Government
wants to avoid giving the projects to them due to their monopolistic behavior. They want to depict their
ideas
thoroughly
and comprehensive to the authority to go to Nagorno-Karabakh.

Right
now
, the CEOs,
CFOs
, presidents of giant
companies
want to occupy the land to
make
more money.
On the contrary
, they ought not to forget the fact that as long as they can earn money, it is
because
of the heroism of the our martyrs who had slender figures.

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