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take children to museums and zoos can improve their imagination. are you agree or disagree

Сarrying children somewhere is interesting for their worldview. they learn new places and information. I do not see anything wrong with going to museums, zoos and concerts together with classmates. it brings them cultural development in character
children are especially interested in the museum. and sometimes going on such walks have great advantages. they will study history in the museum with interest, enjoy concerts after long lessons. besides the museum, going to the zoo is also useful. they discover the animal world. will see different animals from all over the world. I think fat snakes, funny monkeys, transparent fish and funny rabbits will not leave them unattended
in addition, they will learn how to behave in cultural places. they get a lot from such trips.
Children are always curious. it might be bad. which means that trips also have some inconveniences. children can disappear without knowing where they are. according to their interests, they can go along a different path. some children have bad behavior and some are spoiled. the nature of the children are not the same. for example, in a zoo, some children can harm animals, and some will meet their own kind. it will be bad if they do not know how to behave in public. all this requires a lot of patience and nerves from their teacher. because they are responsible for these children.
This is all good, but a big responsibility. to carry children to such places, you must first teach them how to behave in public places. before going out, it is
Сarrying
children somewhere is interesting for their worldview.
they
learn new places and information. I do not
see
anything
wrong
with going to museums, zoos and concerts together with classmates.
it
brings them cultural development in
character


children
are
especially
interested in the museum.
and
sometimes
going on such walks have great advantages.
they
will study history in the museum with interest, enjoy concerts after long lessons.
besides
the museum, going to the zoo is
also
useful.
they
discover the animal world.
will
see
different
animals from all over the world. I
think
fat
snakes,
funny
monkeys, transparent fish and
funny
rabbits will not
leave
them unattended

in addition
, they will learn how to behave in cultural places.
they
get
a lot from such trips.

Children are always curious.
it
might be bad.
which
means that trips
also
have
some
inconveniences.
children
can disappear without knowing where they are.
according
to their interests, they can go along a
different
path.
some
children have bad behavior and
some
are spoiled
.
the
nature of the children are not the same.
for
example, in a zoo,
some
children can harm animals, and
some
will
meet
their
own
kind.
it
will be bad if they do not know how to behave in public.
all
this requires
a lot of
patience and nerves from their teacher.
because
they are responsible for these children.

This is all
good
,
but
a
big
responsibility.
to
carry children to such places, you
must
first
teach them how to behave in public places.
before
going out, it
is

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