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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computer

Nowadays the amount of technologies are being increased. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with this change and purpose some workable solution to tackle with them. Firstly, it demands this modern world. Plus, nowadays human's communication often be with mobile phones. This is very comfortable, useful, fast and it hasn't any problems. Secondly, parents don't worry about their children because they communicate directly and children's safe is keeped. Everything has enigmatic side on the one hand from the phone injurious ray is combed. On the other hand if phones be at some bad-thinking people it will change dangerous weapons. I think if we use it cleverly it is very useful for us or we teached our children to read a book from their childhood I think they learn to think clearly. Recent days there are a lot of bad weapons in the world which afford to fall the foal but the biggest denger for us people's tried to take possession by ideological forces
Nowadays the amount of technologies
are
being increased
. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with this
change
and purpose
some
workable
solution to tackle with them.
Firstly
, it demands this modern world. Plus, nowadays human's communication
often be
with mobile phones. This is
very
comfortable, useful,
fast
and it hasn't any problems.
Secondly
, parents don't worry about their children
because
they communicate
directly
and children's safe is
keeped
. Everything has enigmatic side on the one hand from the phone injurious ray
is combed
.
On the other hand
if phones be at
some
bad
-thinking
people
it will
change
dangerous
weapons. I think if we
use
it
cleverly
it is
very
useful for
us or
we
teached
our children to read a book from their childhood I think they learn to think
clearly
. Recent days there are
a lot of
bad
weapons in the world which afford to fall the foal
but
the biggest
denger
for us
people
's tried to take possession by ideological
forces

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