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Some people think that parent should more actively participate in school life of their children. Others disagree with this idea.

There is not a single parent who does not think about a better future for their children. They want their children to be successful. This is why every parent tries to help them learn and develop. This is the reason why parents are involved in their children's school life.
Personally, I believe that parental involvement in their children's school life benefits both children and themselves. They can help their children in a variety of ways, such as by discussing, reading with them, helping with homework, attending school activities, etc.
Yet there are those who believe that children whose parents are actively involved in school life become less independent and less responsible. However, after much research, it has been shown that students are successful when their parents are also active in school activities.
In conclusion, I believe that student success is possible if their parents also participate in their school life. The deeper they are involved, the greater the positive impact on academic performance will be.
There is not a single parent who does not
think
about a better future for their children. They want their children to be successful. This is why every parent tries to
help
them learn and develop. This is the reason why parents are involved in their children's school life.

Personally
, I believe that parental involvement in their children's school life benefits both children and themselves. They can
help
their children in a variety of ways, such as by discussing, reading with them, helping with homework, attending school activities, etc.

Yet
there are those who believe that children whose parents are
actively
involved in school life become less independent and less responsible.
However
, after much research, it has
been shown
that students are successful when their parents are
also
active in school activities.

In conclusion
, I believe that student success is possible if their parents
also
participate in their school life. The deeper they are involved, the greater the
positive
impact on academic performance will be.

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