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some people feel that young people spend too much time cut off from nature and that they should be encouraged to interact with natural life more. Others feel that this is a fact of modern life and cannot be changed.

with the rise of technology in the contemporary world, interaction between nature and society has reached almost minimum, which is deemed as an adverse trend. There are some people, though, who do not find it problematic. Each perspective can be considered reliable for the reasons that nature brings mental stability of mind while this can be opposite for certain public. every person is encouraged to spend some time in natural site for a number of factors. Mainly it can bring inner peace and balance of work and rest, Many individuals prefer to move to the countryside to obtain the most productive relaxation. There they can enjoy non-verbal communication with animals and plants or simply get aesthetic satisfaction. It is pleasurable for the eye to monitor such experiences, according to majority physicians. Thus, stress is relieved and thoughts are sorted out quite well. Still, it is, to say the least, incorrect to generalize the way humans perceive enjoyment. There is specific public, who avoid natural destinations, finding it pointless to spend time there. It is not really about them being workaholic or disrespecting environment, it is a matter of sheer preference. In most cases, these are extremely sociable people, whose source of motivation and rejoice is communication with others. When such personalities are taken to a remote place, they are likely to feel isolated. Here comes the reverse side of nature, when it does not affect mental well-being positively. There is evidence from research on this idea-the scientific collaboration of Europe brought several surveys in the last decade, where a certain extent of respondents claimed they did not find any attachment with nature in their body and soul. All in all, it is up to personal will, whether somebody wants to connect with nature. Personally, though, I would advice support in terms of visiting resorts and such environmental sites. Every person should have access to them if they want.
with
the rise of technology in the contemporary world, interaction between nature and society has reached almost minimum, which
is deemed
as an adverse trend. There are
some
people
, though, who do not find it problematic. Each perspective can
be considered
reliable for the reasons that nature brings mental stability of mind while this can be opposite for certain public.
every
person
is encouraged
to spend
some
time in natural site for a number of factors.
Mainly
it can bring inner peace and balance of work and rest,
Many
individuals prefer to
move
to the countryside to obtain the most productive relaxation. There they can enjoy non-verbal communication with animals and plants or
simply
get
aesthetic satisfaction. It is pleasurable for the eye to monitor such experiences, according to majority physicians.
Thus
,
stress
is relieved
and thoughts
are sorted
out quite well.
Still
, it is, to say the least, incorrect to generalize the way humans perceive enjoyment. There is specific public, who avoid natural destinations, finding it pointless to spend time there. It is not
really
about them being workaholic or disrespecting environment, it is a matter of sheer preference.
In most cases
, these are
extremely
sociable
people
, whose source of motivation and rejoice is communication with others. When such personalities
are taken
to a remote place, they are likely to feel isolated. Here
comes
the reverse side of nature, when it does not affect mental well-being
positively
. There is evidence from research on this
idea
-the scientific collaboration of Europe brought several surveys in the last decade, where a certain extent of respondents claimed they did not find any attachment with nature in their body and soul. All in all, it is up to personal will, whether somebody wants to connect with nature.
Personally
, though, I would
advice
support in terms of visiting resorts and such environmental sites. Every person should have access to them if they want.

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