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Some people claim the best way to reduce the poverty in developing countries is to provide at least 6 years free education. Do you disagree or agree?

In this day and age, there is a school of thought that whether students should be offered a 6-year free of tuition especially in several developing countries to improve the poverty status of their own nation or not. In this essay, personally, I am not in favor with the given solution due to a number of reasons in the following paragraphs. To begin with, from the perspective of national budget, this action may bring more disadvantages for the governments, due to the fact that there soon will be lack of oppotunity cost of spending elsewhere such as economy and medical system. For example, from a research of scientists, just few coutries can aid a free studying program for their citizens, and all of them are wealthy ones. Moreover, the second reason is that learners are likely to be unemployed after graduating because of numerous graduates at the same time. To illustrate, a great workforce in academic fields may led to fewer ones in labor occupations. Besides, the human resources for academic jobs will seem to be overload in the future. Taking Japanese as an example, thanks to the free tuition, most students have chances to reach the aim, being a doctor or a teacher, whereas this country ought to import a significant number of labor workers every single year. Taking everything into consideration, although it is undoubtedly that the more the authorities aid for education system, the more chances students have to access their well-paid career path. However, I believe that just a certain group of individuals should receive this action like poverty ones.
In this day and age, there is a school of
thought
that whether
students
should
be offered
a 6-year free of tuition
especially
in several
developing countries
to
improve
the poverty status of their
own
nation or not. In this essay,
personally
, I am not in favor with the
given
solution due to a number of reasons in the following paragraphs. To
begin
with, from the perspective of national budget, this action may bring more disadvantages for the
governments
, due to the fact that there
soon
will be lack of
oppotunity
cost of spending elsewhere such as economy and medical system.
For example
, from
a research
of scientists,
just
few
coutries
can aid a free studying program for their citizens, and all of them are wealthy ones.
Moreover
, the second reason is that learners are likely to
be unemployed
after graduating
because
of numerous graduates at the same time. To illustrate, a great workforce in academic fields may led to fewer ones in labor occupations.
Besides
, the human resources for academic jobs will seem to be
overload
in the future. Taking Japanese as an example, thanks to the free tuition, most
students
have chances to reach the aim, being a doctor or a teacher, whereas this country ought to import a significant number of labor workers every single year. Taking everything into consideration, although it is
undoubtedly
that the more the authorities aid for education system, the more chances
students
have to
access their well-paid career path.
However
, I believe that
just
a certain group of individuals should receive this action like poverty ones.

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