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Some people believe that it is better to live in a city, while others prefer countryside life. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people consider that living in cities gives them a much greater chance to get the jobs they want, it is also a good place to live and has more entertainment opportunities for fun. However, it does not mean that living in the city is the right choice. Other groups of people believe that living in the countryside is a great place to live too. So, I would like to tell in brief by discussing my views and giving my opinion.
The main advantages of living in the rural areas are its positive influence on us. Moreover, countryside areas are more peaceful and quieter than a big city, this means that people who live in a village have overall, a much less stressful life, they are able to breathe with clean air and enjoy gorgeous nature. Another reason why people think that the rural areas are better is because it offers fresh air and organic food. The environment in the village areas have less pollution, lower population density and each country person can have access to a large piece of land to grow their own food. However rural areas have many disadvantages too, they have a low bandwidth network connection, lack of high-quality education in school, communication with fewer people, and the main disadvantage is that they do not have the opportunity to find well-paid jobs or a path to personal financial growth. For example, the top 100 companies in Forbes are in New York where there is a much larger population, secondly, there is good infrastructure, finally, in the cities they have many more developed services and technologies. It means that in New York, people are more likely to be able to find the job which he or she wanted.
To sum up, people always may vary in their opinion, but I believe that urban areas provide a better-quality life, a well-paid job, fashionable lifestyle and off course personal growth.
Many
people consider that living in cities gives them a much greater chance to
get
the jobs they want, it is
also
a
good
place to live and has more entertainment opportunities for fun.
However
, it does not mean that living in the city is the right choice. Other groups of people believe that living in the countryside is a great place to live too.
So
, I would like to
tell
in brief
by discussing my views and giving my opinion.

The main advantages of living in the rural areas are its
positive
influence on us.
Moreover
, countryside areas are more peaceful and quieter than a
big
city, this means that people who live in a village have
overall
, a much less stressful life, they are able to breathe with clean air and enjoy gorgeous nature. Another reason why people
think
that the rural areas are better is
because
it offers fresh air and organic food. The environment in the village areas have less pollution, lower population density and each country person can have access to a large piece of land to grow their
own
food.
However
rural areas have
many
disadvantages too, they have a low bandwidth network connection, lack of high-quality education in school, communication with fewer people, and the main disadvantage is that they do not have the opportunity to find well-paid jobs or a path to personal financial growth.
For example
, the top 100
companies
in Forbes are in New York where there is a much larger population,
secondly
, there is
good
infrastructure,
finally
, in the cities they have
many
more developed services and technologies. It means that in New York, people are more likely to be able to find the job which he or she wanted.

To sum up, people always may vary in their opinion,
but
I believe that urban areas provide a better-quality life, a well-paid job, fashionable lifestyle and off course personal growth.

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