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Majority of people believe that students should learn about science of food and how to planning it

Majority of people believe that students should learn about science of food and how to planning it. Many people say that this situation is waste of time, they should learn more vital information. I agree with second notion and this essay will discuss both views and will explain my opinion.
Today, it is a popular belief that children who go to school should learn about the food's science. Learning this science will benefit them enormously. Provided that they study this topic, they will learn planing, calculation by making a meal. Owing to the fact that they have to plan to make a food. Moreover, they must calculate to prepare the mixes. To give a clear example, according to the result of study conducted by California Institute of Technology, student's calculation and prediction ability increased by planning food.
On the other hand, getting back to the another view, a plethora of people say that food science studies for students is a waste of time because this topic does not teach to student anything. Moreover, should they learn the science of food, they will not gain anything. They should study more important lessons which are l ike thatmathematic, history, foreign languages. If they join true subject, they will feel a elegant person.
From my perspective, children should discover real science, such as physics, mathematic, history, biology because real science consists of these subjects. Provided that students get word about these topic, they can be successful in anything. They can be encouraged in all matters.
In conclusion, some people claim that student should learn food's science. Other people say that children should study more essencial topic. I strongly agree with second notion.
Majority of people believe that
students
should
learn about science of food and how to planning it.
Many
people say that this situation is waste of time, they
should
learn more vital information. I
agree
with second notion and this essay will discuss both views and will
explain
my opinion.

Today
, it is a popular belief that children who go to school
should
learn about the food's science. Learning this science will benefit them
enormously
. Provided that they study this topic, they will learn planing, calculation by making a meal. Owing to the fact that they
have to
plan to
make
a food.
Moreover
, they
must
calculate to prepare the mixes. To give a
clear
example, according to the result of study conducted by California Institute of Technology, student's calculation and prediction ability increased by planning food.

On the other hand
, getting back to the another view, a plethora of people say that food science studies for
students
is a waste of time
because
this topic does not teach to
student
anything.
Moreover
,
should
they learn the science of food, they will not gain anything. They
should
study more
important
lessons which are
l ike
thatmathematic
, history, foreign languages. If they
join
true subject, they will feel
a
elegant person.

From my perspective, children
should
discover real science, such as physics, mathematic, history, biology
because
real science consists of these subjects. Provided that
students
get
word about these topic, they can be successful in anything. They can
be encouraged
in all matters.

In conclusion
,
some
people claim that
student
should
learn food's science. Other people say that children
should
study more
essencial
topic. I
strongly
agree
with second notion.

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