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It is more difficult for women to succeed in working life

Women and men are now very active in business life. Today, the most of the women are more active in business areas than in the past. Also climbing the career ladder. As far as I am concerned, being woman is more difficult than being man to be successful in working life.
To begin with, since women take an active role in both business life and home life, it is more difficult for women to be successful in business life than men. Women have more responsibilities at home life than men. There are many housework responsibilities that are being uploaded to women. For example, I think it is the most hardest one is cooking even more cooking at home. Besides, their responsibilities not only end with cooking but also house cleaning, organisation, ironing, laundry. That is impossible to count.
Secondly, many women are subjected to a form of psychological violence perpetrated by other people, especially men. Women complain most often at company meetings or conversations being cut off and underestimated. Some bosses behave badly against women, for example, mobbing. Also, women also refer to the stealing of ideas. Idea theft occurs when men's opinions are approved more quickly and easily than women and so I think it is more difficult for women to fail than men for these reasons.
On the other hand, it is claimed that people's views are equal for all.
Women and men are
now
very
active in business life.
Today
, the most of the women are more active in business areas than in the past.
Also
climbing the career ladder. As far as I
am concerned
, being woman is more difficult than being
man
to be successful in working life.

To
begin
with, since women take an active role in both business life and home life, it is more difficult for women to be successful in business life than men. Women have more responsibilities at home life than men. There are
many
housework responsibilities that are being uploaded to women.
For example
, I
think
it is the
most hardest
one is cooking even more cooking at home.
Besides
, their responsibilities not
only
end
with cooking
but
also
house
cleaning,
organisation
, ironing, laundry.
That is
impossible to count.

Secondly
,
many
women
are subjected
to a form of psychological violence perpetrated by other
people
,
especially
men. Women complain most
often
at
company
meetings or conversations being
cut
off and underestimated.
Some
bosses behave
badly
against women,
for example
, mobbing.
Also
, women
also
refer to the stealing of
ideas
.
Idea
theft occurs when
men
's opinions
are approved
more
quickly
and
easily
than
women and
so
I
think
it is more difficult for women to fail than men for these reasons.

On the other hand
, it
is claimed
that
people
's views are equal for all.

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