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It is irrefutable fact that most individuals believe that it is preferable to get som recommendations

It is irrefutable fact that most individuals believe that it is preferable to get some recommendation from senior citizens rather than younger generations. I absolutely agree with this statement however we also take into consideration young people's great skills regarding a range of fields.
To commence with, a number of people consider that as the elderly undergo ups and downs of life and work they are expected to provide satisfying knowledge to us. To make an illustration, when I was studying University, my parents used to give right guidance to decide right choices in terms of my presentations or subject. Afterwards while I was beginning my career my grandfather and father followed to reach great accomplishments since their ex-occupations were related to my chosen job.
On the other hand, admittedly, younger generations are aware of technology much deeper than aged people. Because of that, they are highly likely to learn current innovations immediately with high enthusiasm. Therefore, if people need some aids about using up-to-date gadgets or especially modern trends at fashion the youth can be example to give proper data. For example, at workplace teenagers are prone to know more information comparing to older employees.
In conclusion, after analyses and examples. I reckon that it all depends on situation and theme when someone ask advice from people. Seniors are masters of life or work whereas youngsters are capable of share innovate information to us.
It is irrefutable fact that most individuals believe that it is preferable to
get
some
recommendation from senior citizens
rather
than younger generations. I
absolutely
agree
with this statement
however
we
also
take into consideration young
people
's great
skills
regarding a range of fields.

To commence with, a number of people consider that as the elderly undergo ups and downs of life and work they are
expected
to provide satisfying knowledge to us. To
make
an illustration, when I was studying University, my parents
used
to give right guidance to decide right choices in terms of my presentations or subject. Afterwards while I was beginning my career my grandfather and father followed to reach great accomplishments since their ex-occupations
were related
to my chosen job.

On the other hand
,
admittedly
, younger generations are aware of technology much deeper than aged people.
Because
of that, they are
highly
likely to learn
current
innovations immediately with high enthusiasm.
Therefore
, if people need
some
aids about using up-to-date gadgets or
especially
modern trends at fashion the youth can be example to give proper data. For example, at workplace
teenagers
are prone to know more information comparing to older employees.

In conclusion
, after analyses and examples. I reckon that it all depends on situation and theme when someone
ask
advice from people. Seniors are masters of life or work whereas youngsters are capable of share innovate information to us.

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