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In the past ten years , It seems to be more hard to survive on Earth

In the past ten years, It seems to be more hard to survive on our planet which have been ruins after several million years and some of people think that we should invest budget on studying other planets to live. But I believe that we can fix the Earth to continue to live on.
In the one hand, There are several reasons why we must recognize that the Earth is being ruined and we shout find a new live. Firstly, in recent decade global warming has become a serious problem that must pay attention on. Global warming being happened by man-made which cause by carbon dioxide produced by industrial and transportation, as the result the effect of this problem is ice is melts in two poles of our planet. Beside, natural disaster also cause by global warming and bring back for human a lot of damage. Secondly, famine is which cause by high live quality and the grow up of population and its effect is a huge amount of people do not have enough budget buy a meal which make they full. So that citizens must work a lots to get salary and that will make them exhausted and tired. If state organization can solve this problem its will bring back a serious damage for people live. However, find the new life in our solar systems is the solution for these problems
In the other hand, study for new planet to live on may be bring back a lots of risks and there are some reasons why we should not research other planet. Firstly, expenditure money on researching other planet is waste of money because it is too hard and if it is failed it will bring back a big risk linked to money. Beside, famine is still occurs so that invest money on research for new planet is a bad idea. Secondly, there is still a solution to fixed the global warming, as a result because of COVID-19 there is few of people go outside and use their transport and less industry working so that carbon dioxide will be reduce and we will have more fresh air. As a prove that people still fixed these problem and should not waste money on research new planet to live
In the way of conclusion, research new planet to live on is a quiet good idea. But however, Earth is our home we must protect is and save its because we can fix it
In the past ten years, It seems to be more
hard
to survive on our planet which have been ruins after several million years and
some
of people
think
that we
should
invest budget on studying other planets to live.
But
I believe that we can
fix
the Earth to continue to live on.

In the one hand, There are several reasons why we
must
recognize that the Earth is being
ruined and
we shout find a new live.
Firstly
, in recent decade
global
warming has become a serious problem that
must
pay attention on.
Global
warming
being happened
by
man
-made which cause by carbon dioxide produced by industrial and transportation, as the result the effect of this problem is ice is melts in two poles of our planet. Beside, natural disaster
also
cause by
global
warming and bring back for human a lot of damage.
Secondly
, famine is which cause by high live quality and the
grow
up of population and its effect is a huge amount of people do not have
enough
budget
buy
a meal which
make
they full.
So
that citizens
must
work a lots to
get
salary and that will
make
them exhausted and tired. If state organization can solve this problem
its
will bring back
a serious damage
for people live.
However
, find the new life in our solar systems is the solution for these problems

In the other hand, study for new planet to live on may be
bring
back a lots of
risks
and there are
some
reasons why we
should
not research other planet.
Firstly
, expenditure money on researching other planet is waste of money because it is too
hard
and if it
is failed
it will bring back a
big
risk
linked to money. Beside, famine is
still
occurs
so
that invest money on research for new planet is a
bad
idea
.
Secondly
, there is
still
a solution to
fixed
the
global
warming,
as a result
because of COVID-19 there is few of people go outside and
use
their transport and less industry working
so
that carbon dioxide will be
reduce and
we will have more fresh air. As a
prove
that people
still
fixed
these problem and
should
not waste money on research new planet to
live


In the way of conclusion, research new planet to live on is a quiet
good
idea
.
But
however
, Earth is our home we
must
protect is and save
its
because we can
fix
it

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