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The entrance fees for a museum visiting normally for several museum

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The entrance fees for a museum visiting normally for several museum all over the world nowadays, besides in some museum the costumer do not have to pay the fees. I agree that entrance fees should be added in each museum all around the world. On the one hand, heritage must be keep in museum to keep the history or some ancient things for the costumer come to research or take picture or maybe just walk around to view the glory of history. However, by the grow up of society nowadays you can easy to go on the internet and find history and can make a research in most comfortable way in stead of waste our time or lost about 5-10 dollars to go to the museum. Moreover, go to museum we must wait until our turn to come in and during the time we visit we must get over the crowd and choose most suitable place to watch and research about the thing right before our eyes. On the other hand, There are several reasons why entrance fees should be added in all museums. Firstly, some museums are being destroyed by the missing in responsibility of people despite of the rule have reminded them. So that, entrance fees is the best way to make costumer have more responsibility during the time they visit the museum. Finally, the money for entrance fees is very helpful because after a long year in working the quality of the museums is downwards so that the owner must upgrade or the museums must be close. Or at least they must take fees for taking picture because the income is use for upgrade the museum and it is suitable way to maintance the museum. In conclusion, although the entrance fees for museum is too suitable but I believe that if each one pay the fees for each time It will contribute a part although it is small for the develop of the museum.
The
entrance
fees
for a
museum
visiting
normally
for several
museum
all over the world nowadays,
besides
in
some
museum
the costumer do not
have to
pay the
fees
. I
agree
that
entrance
fees
should be
added
in each
museum
all around the world. On the one hand, heritage
must
be
keep
in
museum
to
keep
the history or
some
ancient things for the costumer
come
to research or take picture or maybe
just
walk around to view the glory of history.
However
, by the
grow
up of society nowadays you can easy to go on the internet and find history and can
make
a research
in most comfortable way
in stead of
waste our
time
or lost about 5-10 dollars to go to the
museum
.
Moreover
, go to
museum
we
must
wait until our turn to
come
in and during the
time
we visit we
must
get
over the crowd and choose most suitable place to
watch
and research about the thing right
before
our eyes.
On the other hand
, There are several reasons why
entrance
fees
should be
added
in all
museums
.
Firstly
,
some
museums
are being
destroyed
by the missing in responsibility of
people
despite of
the
rule
have reminded them.
So
that,
entrance
fees
is the best way to
make
costumer have more responsibility during the
time
they visit the
museum
.
Finally
, the money for
entrance
fees
is
very
helpful
because
after a long year in working the quality of the
museums
is downwards
so
that the owner
must
upgrade or the
museums
must
be close. Or at least they
must
take
fees
for taking picture
because
the income is
use
for upgrade the
museum
and it is
suitable
way to
maintance
the museum.
In conclusion
, although the
entrance
fees
for
museum
is too suitable
but
I believe that if each one pay the
fees
for each
time
It will contribute a part although it is
small
for
the develop
of the
museum
.
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IELTS essay The entrance fees for a museum visiting normally for several museum

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