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If you had a small amount of money, would you prefer to spend it right away or safe it?

Despite any benefits to spend it right away or to save it, given the choice I prefer to save the money. I think this way for several reasons.
Firstly, saving your money helps you to live without any doubts concerning your financial situation. Although you ought to reduce your living-standards concerning holidays or luxury stuff, I am concerned that such basic things as electricity and hot water are much more essential. Furthermore it is also possible tp spend the holidays for instance ob the Bahamas, own the contrary you have to save your money for a few years.
Secondly you get interest if you decide to save your money in a bank account. The amount if money will increase over the years, due to the fact the more money you save the mote interest you will get.
Finally the fact has to mentioned that saving money contributes to the future of your children. If, however, you have financial reserves there is the possibility to get the best education for your children. Money has tremendous effects not only on the choice of highschool but also in the chive of university. The tuition fees are enormous for an elite university such as Harvard.
In conclusion on the one hand saving money contributes to a less stressful and a solid living standard. On the other the amount of money increases it self due to the fact of interest. Additionally if you save your money you are able to offer your children a unique an elite education.
Despite any benefits to spend it right away or to save it,
given
the choice I prefer to save the money. I
think
this way for several reasons.

Firstly
, saving your money
helps
you to
live
without any doubts concerning your financial situation. Although you ought to
reduce
your living-standards concerning holidays or luxury stuff, I
am concerned
that such basic things as electricity and hot water are much more essential.
Furthermore
it is
also
possible
tp
spend the holidays
for instance
ob the Bahamas,
own
the contrary you
have to
save your money for a few years.

Secondly
you
get
interest if you decide to save your money in a bank account. The amount if money will increase over the years, due to the fact the more money you save the mote interest you will
get
.

Finally
the fact
has to
mentioned that saving money contributes to the future of your children. If,
however
, you have financial reserves there is the possibility to
get
the best education for your children. Money has tremendous effects not
only
on the choice of
highschool
but
also
in the chive of university. The tuition fees are enormous for an elite university such as Harvard.

In conclusion
on the one hand saving money contributes to a less stressful and a solid living standard. On the other the amount of money increases
it self
due to the fact of interest.
Additionally
if you save your money you are able to offer your children a unique an elite education.

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