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cultural activities is more important than sport?

cultural activities have an important role in our life. knowing music, theatre, cinema arts is very useful for young people to develop themselves and their society after all they should pay attention to another subject like sport besides these subjects. if we want to have a modern society with active and creative young people, we should encourage them to spend their time on variable things. they shouldn't spend their time just on one subject because it can't help them to improve their personality in different aspects. listening to music, learning to play a musical instrumental, watching a movie or theatre, and understanding all of these topics can help young people for mental development but they shouldn't forget their physical development so for improving this aspect they should play some sports or do other exercises.
young people must try to spend their time on all of these activities equally. if they do this work they being successful to develop their personality so they can be more useful for their society and their country.
cultural
activities have an
important
role in our life.
knowing
music,
theatre
, cinema arts is
very
useful for young people to develop themselves and their society
after all
they
should
pay attention to another subject like sport
besides
these subjects.
if
we want to have a modern society with active and creative young people, we
should
encourage them to spend their time on variable things.
they
shouldn't spend their time
just
on one subject
because
it can't
help
them to
improve
their personality in
different
aspects.
listening
to music, learning to play a musical instrumental, watching a movie or
theatre
, and understanding all of these topics can
help
young people for mental development
but
they shouldn't forget their physical development
so
for improving this aspect they
should
play
some
sports or do other exercises.

young
people
must
try to spend their time on all of these activities
equally
.
if
they do this work they being successful to develop their personality
so
they can be more useful for their society and their country.

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