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The table below shows the number of museum patrons by age between 1997 and 2003.

The provided chart illustrates the number of museum attendance in five groups of age from 1997 to 2003.
Overall, it is clearly seen that first and second group (0-15, 16-30 years old) accounted for the highest rate throughout the whole period.
First and foremost, the combined total of museum visitors between 0 and 30 years old totaled more than 30, 000 of the 40, 000 visitors per year.
Also, the only decreased in total of museum visitors occurred from 1997 to 1999 which was 41, 600 to 31, 870 people. These two groups accounted for three quarter of all museum attendance.
Regard to the remaining groups, it is noticeable that the number of visitors decreased as age increased.
Attendance among adults between 31 to 45 years old group was consistently higher than 46 to 60 years old. This figure fluctuated at approximately 6000 and 700, respectively.
Lastly, over 61 years old crowd was the lowest visitors and the figure never exceeded 100 in any year.
The provided chart illustrates the number of museum attendance in five groups of age from 1997 to 2003.

Overall
, it is
clearly
seen
that
first
and second group (0-15, 16-30 years old) accounted for the highest rate throughout the whole period.

First
and foremost, the combined total of museum visitors between 0 and 30 years old totaled more than 30, 000 of the 40, 000 visitors per year.

Also
, the
only
decreased in total of museum visitors occurred from 1997 to 1999 which was 41, 600 to 31, 870
people
. These two groups accounted for
three quarter
of all museum attendance.

Regard to the remaining groups, it is noticeable that the number of visitors decreased as age increased.

Attendance among adults
between 31 to 45
years old group was
consistently
higher than 46 to 60 years old. This figure fluctuated at approximately 6000 and 700,
respectively
.

Lastly
, over 61 years old crowd was the lowest visitors and the figure never exceeded 100 in any year.

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