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The given table shows the employment percentage in various sector in Australia the years 1989-2009

The provided table shows the information about the employment percentage of people in various sectors in Australia between the years of 1989 to 2009. The data has been given in percentage.
Overall, it can be seen that during a period of 10years the maximum employed sector shifted from the manufacturing sector to the health care.
In 1989, the highest percentage of employees who worked in manufacturing. It was at 15% but in the last year it decreased and reached at 9. 8%. The proportion of employees were employed in retail were small difference in both years. In 1989 and 2009 it was only 11. 8% and 10. 1%. respectively. In healthcare, the percentage of employees increased from 9, 6% to 11. 3%between the years 1989-2009.
The provided table
shows
the information about the employment percentage of
people
in various sectors in Australia between the years of 1989 to 2009. The data has been
given
in percentage.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that during a period of 10years the maximum employed sector shifted from the manufacturing sector to the health care.

In 1989, the highest percentage of employees who worked in manufacturing. It was at 15%
but
in the last year it decreased and reached at 9. 8%. The proportion of employees
were employed
in retail were
small
difference in both years. In 1989 and 2009 it was
only
11. 8% and 10. 1%.
respectively
. In healthcare, the percentage of employees increased from 9, 6% to 11. 3%between the years 1989-2009.

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