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The chart below shows how people living in London travelled to work in the period 2000-2010 as a percentage of the total

The given chart illustrates many types of transports that were used to commuting from home to the workplace in London in the period 2000-2010. Overall, the bus was the highest percentages, while the private car and the walking were the lowest percentages over the decade.
At the top, the percentage of the bus was still the peak of all transports for ten years, is 47% of all vehicle in 2010. This is a humongous percentage than its two smaller competitors compare, the underground and the private car. Also, there was a slight rise of 3% in the underground's percentage over the period. In contrast, the private car saw a increase of 6%
The
given
chart illustrates
many
types of transports that were
used
to commuting from home to the workplace in London in the period 2000-2010.
Overall
, the bus was the highest percentages, while the private car and the walking were the lowest percentages over the decade.

At the top, the percentage of the bus was
still
the peak of all transports for ten years, is 47% of all vehicle in 2010. This is a humongous percentage than its two smaller competitors compare, the underground and the private car.
Also
, there was a slight rise of 3% in the underground's percentage over the period.
In contrast
, the private car
saw
a
increase of 6%

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