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The bar show the people visit cinema in week in European countriest 2003 and 2007.

The bar graph depicts information about the proportion of individuals visiting a cinema during seven days of the week in European nation from 2003 to 2007.
Overall, It is clear that graph shows some fluctuation through out the periods but people prefer going to cinema in weekend rather than weekdays. While, highest number of people watch cinema on saturday than sunday and least were perfer to visited on monday.
It is clearly observed from the graph that, in 2003, 40% people going to cinema on saturady, compared to 30% on friday and sunday each. On others days, percentage of visitors to cinema was maximum on tuesday 20% whislt, it was minimum on monday only 10%.
Further more, There was same number of vistior tend to cinema on friday over all periods. It was 30%. However, fewer people want to prefer cinema on wedensday in 2005. It was decrease by 4%.
The bar graph depicts information about the proportion of individuals visiting a cinema during seven days of the week in European nation from 2003 to 2007.

Overall
, It is
clear
that graph
shows
some
fluctuation
through out
the periods
but
people prefer going to cinema in weekend
rather
than weekdays. While,
highest
number of people
watch
cinema on
saturday
than
sunday
and least were
perfer
to visited on
monday
.

It is
clearly
observed from the graph that, in 2003, 40% people going to cinema on
saturady
, compared to 30% on
friday
and
sunday
each. On others days, percentage of visitors to cinema was maximum on
tuesday
20%
whislt
, it was minimum on
monday
only
10%.

Further
more, There was same number of
vistior
tend to cinema on
friday
over all periods. It was 30%.
However
, fewer people want to prefer cinema on
wedensday
in 2005. It was decrease by 4%.

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