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The line graph shows unemployment status in rural areas and urban areas as percentage in Australia in 2012 and this situation is divided in four quarters in a year.
If we look at the graph carefully, rural areas unemployment had the highest rate by 6. 5% in first quarter while, the people who lives in the rural areas had the lowest unemployment rate by 2%.
To continue with, in comparision to urban areas unemployment rate, which was up to 4%, rural areas unemployment fallen to almost 4. 5% in end of the 2nd quarter. Immediately after, urban unemployment rate saw 2% as sharply decreased and rural unemployment rate was 5. 5% in 3rd quarter, people who lives in cities and rural regions had almost same unemployment rate bye 4. 5% and around 4. 8% respectively.
To sum up, generally, inspide of the fact that unemployment rates has fluctuation sometimes along quarters, urban areas unemployment rate increases whereas, rural areas unemployment rate decreases.
The line graph
shows
unemployment status in rural areas and urban areas as percentage in Australia in 2012 and this situation
is divided
in four quarters in a year.

If we look at the graph
carefully
, rural
areas
unemployment had the highest rate by 6. 5% in
first
quarter while, the
people
who
lives
in the rural areas had the lowest unemployment rate by 2%.

To continue with, in
comparision
to urban
areas
unemployment rate, which was up to 4%, rural
areas
unemployment fallen to almost 4. 5% in
end
of the 2nd quarter. Immediately after, urban unemployment rate
saw
2% as
sharply
decreased and rural unemployment rate was 5. 5% in 3rd quarter,
people
who
lives
in cities and rural regions had almost same unemployment rate bye 4. 5% and around 4. 8%
respectively
.

To sum up,
generally
,
inspide
of the fact that unemployment rates has fluctuation
sometimes
along quarters, urban
areas
unemployment rate increases whereas, rural
areas
unemployment rate decreases.

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