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The real dark on the Dark Waters movie

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Is there someone willing to lose everything for its own community? Is there in this world someone that is ready to risk its work, its family, and its own life for the commonwealth of a community, or even all the world? Well, the 2019 film based on real facts “Dark Waters” show us yes, starred by Mark Ruffalo and Anne Hathaway, the film is about two hours and 6 minutes, directed by the wonderful Todd Haynes, the movie has been well received and even it has no gained awards of the size of the Oscars or the Emmys, it has been nominated for other kind of prizes, like the satellite awards, for best drama actor and for best adapted script, this amazing movie follows the story of Robert Billot interpreted by Mark Ruffalo who will do everything for nothing but the truth to come out. The story begins with Robert Billot working on its lawyer’s firm that defends many chemical companies from demands on the common people, what Robert doesn’t wait is a farmer that gets to its office, asking for help from a good lawyer, for in that order of ideas demanding one of the greatest companies its firm defends “Dupont” and the fact of deciding to help that farmer changes all his life, but at first Robert doesn’t believe that farmer, so he decides to visit he and his grandma on the old town of Parkersburg on West Virginia, there he finds out horrible death animals, the farmer affirms that the creek has been contaminated with many chemicals from Dupont. Based on this peculiar case the story starts to evolve, with what Robert thought that one routine demand to wastes management in DuPont ends up with many the discovery of many horrible things people suffers from due to this chemicals, for the story to follow, with collective demands, people dying for cancerous illnesses or other sicknesses, a lonely lawyer trying to convince all its firm to help him to demand this company, but at the end it would be just a lawyer against one of the biggest chemical companies of all the times, and he would not doubt on using all his force, all his power, risk his marriage, his life, his family and his work, and that it’s the price of the truth to come out. This wonderful film as it is a real-life film ends up as every good movie with our good friend Robert fighting in a court searching justice for all the affected, for them to receive their money for all the crimes DuPont committed against them, and cuts up with the facts, the facts of what happened with that company that was secretly poisoning a town, with the lawyer that fought for nothing but justice and truth and what happened with the affected community. No matter what this lawyer will find the way to justice for the common people, and for the people on the top of the economics tower get all the profit, but why? Why de we always worry on money but not on people, if since the beginning of history, we’ve been social animals, in the early beginning of human history we were social animals, we lived in community, and we worried for each other, but since industrialization and capitalism beginning we started to worry only in profit, but in my opinion this lawyer takes out all of this from its mind and becomes again one of those early humans that lives to and for its community risking all of its life, showing us that in all these dark waters there is always light. Many people would say this is just another real-life movie that shows with actors what happened in the real life, but for me this movie is much more deeper than what it shows in the screen, for me there is one element on this movie that goes further than what you can see or that can be shown on a screen, there is something behind each character and all goes from the perspective of the lawyer Robert. Behind this lawyer I see more than a person that is trying to get wealth by demanding one of the greatest chemical companies on the US, I see a person that for the first time in this decade is really trying to help the people, enlights everybody on how a good human being is, and on how we should all act. Behind the DuPont company, I just see men who don’t care anything but to get not even a profit just to gain all for them. Now let’s talk on the real dark thing on dark waters, the really sad thing we can find behind this movie is the fact that is it based on real facts, and the thing that almost everybody on Parkersburg is not a lie, and it’s not made up of fiction, the fact that DuPont poisoned almost all of the population on Parkersburg is not a lie and the fact that because of having many products that help on cooking cause us to have many toxic wastes inside of us when eating is no fiction, we are really endangered because all this chemicals and all this rules and restrictions chemical companies avoid always. In my opinion this is such a good movie because, it shows a reality most of us didn’t know, and it also shows what has been done on this, it shows us the truth with no filter, everything comes out, we find out what many companies have been doing for years poisoning almost everybody with many chemicals done for cooking and that at the end is all for money, the movie has really good actors, and it is very well produced, from its music to the type of image it uses, all the dialogues its just amazing because it finds out how to transform a really scaring truth on a film in a way people can understand what and why they are in danger from. It finds out how to tell a truth from an only perspective of a lawyer that had to change all that it knows and defends for someone he doesn’t know, to find out people is being poisoned with in biochemical term indestructible, chemicals that can really kill us without us knowing. The only bad thing or thing to improve I found out is the management of the resource of time, we are in 1999 in the movie and from that year there are many scenes and that is good because we as audience can realize all the important events on the movie that happened on that year, but in some years we have just one scene what I think is kind of unnecessary, because of course there were more things that happened on one year, or if it is just one scene just skip it, but not only to put one scene on a year, because the audience in my opinion will feel that the movie passes so fast, and the point of the movie is to be slow for audience have the chance to analyze it or think and make their own conclusions to be surprised at the end of the movie. For me the score on this movie is about 4. 5 stars, because for me the movie is really good teaches a reality in a way all audiences can understand and sympathize with, the film is so deep, has a very beautiful message that audiences over 12 or 13 can understand, but for me the management of time is not well used and that is a very important resource on movies, but for the rest is a good fil that deserves it’s time to see, and to analyze. In conclusion in Dark waters anyone over 12 or 13 years would appreciate will learn of, and will be much more critic on daily life aspects, and also would find the values of respect and common wealth, so in my opinion the movie shows a reality in a very good way, teaches people about the reality of their daily life, and shows everyone who sees it that there is rally someone that is will to lose everything on his life for common wealth.
Is there
someone
willing to lose
everything
for its
own
community
? Is there in this world
someone
that is
ready to
risk
its work, its family, and its
own
life
for the commonwealth of a
community
, or even all the world? Well, the 2019 film based on real facts
“Dark
Waters”
show
us yes, starred by Mark Ruffalo and Anne Hathaway, the film is about two hours and 6 minutes, directed by the wonderful Todd Haynes, the
movie
has been well received and even it has no gained awards of the size of the Oscars or the Emmys, it has
been nominated
for other kind of prizes, like the satellite awards, for best drama actor and for best adapted script, this amazing
movie
follows the story of Robert Billot interpreted by Mark Ruffalo who will do
everything
for nothing
but
the
truth
to
come
out. The story
begins
with Robert Billot working on its
lawyer’s
firm that defends
many
chemical
companies
from demands on the
common
people
, what Robert doesn’t wait is a
farmer
that
gets
to its office, asking for
help
from a
good
lawyer
, for in that order of
ideas
demanding one of the greatest
companies
its firm defends “Dupont” and the
fact
of deciding to
help
that
farmer
changes
all his
life
,
but
at
first
Robert doesn’t believe that
farmer
,
so
he decides to visit he and his grandma on the
old
town of Parkersburg on West Virginia, there he
finds
out horrible death animals, the
farmer
affirms that the creek has
been contaminated
with
many
chemicals
from Dupont. Based on this peculiar case the story
starts
to evolve, with what Robert
thought
that one routine demand to wastes management in DuPont
ends
up with
many
the discovery of
many
horrible things
people
suffers from due to this
chemicals
, for the story to follow, with collective demands,
people
dying for cancerous illnesses or other sicknesses, a lonely
lawyer
trying to convince all its firm to
help
him to demand this
company
,
but
at the
end
it would be
just
a
lawyer
against one of the biggest
chemical
companies
of all the
times
, and he would not doubt on using all his force, all his power,
risk
his marriage, his
life
, his family and his work, and that it’s the price of the
truth
to
come
out. This wonderful film as it is a real-life film
ends
up as every
good
movie
with our
good
friend Robert fighting in a court searching justice for all the
affected
, for them to receive their money for all the crimes DuPont committed against them, and
cuts
up with the facts, the facts of what
happened
with that
company
that was
secretly
poisoning a town, with the
lawyer
that fought for nothing
but
justice and
truth
and what
happened
with the
affected
community. No matter what this
lawyer
will
find
the way to justice for the
common
people
, and for the
people
on the top of the economics tower
get
all the profit,
but
why? Why de we always worry on money
but
not on
people
, if since the beginning of history, we’ve been social animals, in the early beginning of human history we were social animals, we
lived
in
community
, and we worried for each other,
but
since industrialization and capitalism beginning we
started
to worry
only
in profit,
but
in my
opinion
this
lawyer
takes out all of this from its mind and becomes again one of those early humans that
lives
to and for its
community
risking all of its
life
, showing us that in all these
dark
waters
there is always light.
Many
people
would say this is
just
another real-life
movie
that
shows
with actors what
happened
in the real
life
,
but
for me this
movie
is much more deeper than what it
shows
in the screen, for me there is one element on this
movie
that goes
further
than what you can
see
or that can
be shown
on a screen, there is something behind each character and all goes from the perspective of the lawyer Robert. Behind this
lawyer
I
see
more than a person
that is
trying to
get
wealth by demanding one of the greatest
chemical
companies
on the US, I
see
a person that for the
first
time
in this decade is
really
trying to
help
the
people
, enlights everybody on how a
good
human being is, and on how we should all act. Behind the DuPont
company
, I
just
see
men
who don’t care anything
but
to
get
not even a profit
just
to gain all for them.
Now
let
’s talk on the real
dark
thing on
dark
waters
, the
really
sad thing we can find behind this
movie
is the
fact
that is
it based on real facts, and the thing that almost everybody on Parkersburg is not a lie, and it’s not made up of fiction, the
fact
that DuPont poisoned almost all of the population on Parkersburg is not a lie and the fact that
because
of having
many
products that
help
on cooking cause us to have
many
toxic wastes inside of us when eating is no fiction, we are
really
endangered
because
all this
chemicals
and all this
rules
and restrictions
chemical
companies
avoid always. In my
opinion
this is such a
good
movie
because
, it
shows
a reality most of us didn’t know, and it
also
shows
what has
been done
on this, it
shows
us the truth with no filter,
everything
comes
out, we
find
out what
many
companies
have been doing for years poisoning almost everybody with
many
chemicals
done for cooking and that at the
end
is all for money, the
movie
has
really
good
actors, and it is
very
well produced, from its music to the type of image it
uses
, all the dialogues its
just
amazing
because
it
finds
out how to transform a
really
scaring
truth
on a film in a way
people
can understand what and why they are in
danger
from. It
finds
out how to
tell
a
truth
from an
only
perspective of a
lawyer
that had to
change
all that it knows and defends for
someone
he doesn’t know, to
find
out
people
is
being poisoned
with in biochemical term indestructible,
chemicals
that can
really
kill us without us knowing. The
only
bad
thing or thing to
improve
I found out is the management of the resource of
time
, we are in 1999 in the
movie
and from that
year
there are
many
scenes and
that is
good
because
we as
audience
can realize all the
important
events
on the
movie
that
happened
on that
year
,
but
in
some
years we have
just
one scene what I
think
is kind of unnecessary,
because
of course
there were more things that
happened
on one
year
, or if it is
just
one scene
just
skip it,
but
not
only
to put one scene on a
year
,
because
the
audience
in my
opinion
will feel that the movie passes
so
fast
, and the point of the
movie
is to be slow for
audience
have the chance to analyze it or
think
and
make
their
own
conclusions to
be surprised
at the
end
of the movie. For me the score on this
movie
is about 4. 5 stars,
because
for me the
movie
is
really
good
teaches a reality in a way all
audiences
can understand and sympathize with, the film is
so
deep, has a
very
beautiful
message that audiences over 12 or 13 can understand,
but
for me the management of
time
is not well
used
and
that is
a
very
important
resource on
movies
,
but
for the rest is a
good
fil that deserves it’s
time
to
see
, and to analyze.
In conclusion
in
Dark
waters
anyone over 12 or 13 years would appreciate will learn of, and will be much more critic on daily
life
aspects, and
also
would
find
the values of respect and
common
wealth,
so
in my
opinion
the
movie
shows
a reality in a
very
good
way, teaches
people
about the reality of their daily
life
, and
shows
everyone who
sees
it that there is rally
someone
that is
will to lose
everything
on his
life
for
common
wealth.
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