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My vision for India @100 years

My vision for India @100 years 2PBLo
India is a land of freedom, diversity and cultural richness. The year 2047 will be a milestone for Indians for it is the year when India will complete 100 years of independence. The year will mark 100 years of the unforgettable freedom fighters who lost their lives for a nation where we now live freely today. India has evolved as a whole nation yet, it is still a developing country. There are some things which are hurdles on the path of India becoming a developed country. These hurdles are what actually pose me to have a vision of how India would be without them. World is and would have changed dramatically. Artificial intelligence and virtual reality would be dominating the world. Eventually India will become a developed country and would be at par with the western countries with good healthcare, infrastructure, quality of life and a high happiness index. The healthcare is also a major factor direct relation with the quality of life. I want India to be capable of handling situations like a pandemic to a greater extent with improved medical facilities. Improving health facilities does not only mean in making them better but also available for all. There should be more hospitals like the AIIMS in the country with an increased bed capacity. Vehicles move on roads and people walk on roads. How does it feel when this concrete having no motion of itself become the reason of having fatal accidents and injuries? There are numerous roads having potholes and some not even properly lay. It is not only the roads but also railway tracks that need attention. I want Indian roads to be the best example of the safest and well made roads in the world. I wish India becomes a superpower militarily and economically. There are evidences that assert of India becoming number 1 economy followed by US, China and Japan. Old systems of living and cultural heritage are revived. The greatest gift to the world from India would be Sanskrit becoming dominant worldwide. Population would have decreased and India would not be as densely populated by percentage as it is today. India should become so much self dependant that other countries would have to strive hard to invest in India. India should become a self-reliant country. There should be enough and equal opportunities for all sects of the society. There should be some provision of providing jobs to the illiterates. Everyone should be able to go to school irrespective of their gender. Education is a right as well as a duty. It is education that will help us combat poverty. Food is a basic right of people. People die of starvation. By 2047, India should become a country where no one goes to bed without food. People should not beg for money and long for food. Many die in road accidents due sleeping on the streets at night. I want India to be capable of providing food for at least twice a day and shelter. Farmers are the backbone of the country. They are the ones who provide support to life by growing crops. There are a lot of problems that farmers face like not getting enough money for their harvest or not being able to nurture the crops properly. By 2047, I want a boom in the agricultural sector like having the best quality machines to providing full support to the farmers for growing their crops. Also they should be trained about the seeds, machines and fertilisers. Knowledge is the greatest treasure one has. India should be capable of having a powerful higher education system and opportunities so that the youth does not have leave his own country. This also relates to eradicating poverty and unemployment. I want India to become a corruption free country. The police and the people in power should work with honesty. Every official work should be done without any complications. Laws should be exercised more meticulously for it is often said that laws are not followed in India. India should become the example of a law abiding country. Practices like bribing should be punished and fines should be imposed with more seriousness. A country’s biggest responsibility is the safety of its citizens. It is not that India is not a safe country but, women are not safe in a large part of the country. I want women to walk on every street on India freely, without having to think twice before stepping out at night. Every state and every road should be safe for women to live and walk on. The punishment for crime against women should be stricter and practiced seriously. My vision for India is to expand its infrastructure, medical facilities and all the factors affecting the quality of life. I want India to have a prominent stand in the world as an independent, self-reliant, self capable and a country to which other nations of the world would be attracted to. By 2047, India should become a developed country having solved most of its problems. India should grow in all sectors like education, research, advancement in technology etc. It should become a country everyone would dream to live in. Finally, I wish India would be able to overcome these shortcomings and emerge as a prosperous country.
India is a land of freedom, diversity and cultural richness. The
year
2047 will be a milestone for Indians for it is the
year
when India will complete 100 years of independence. The
year
will mark 100 years of the unforgettable freedom fighters who lost their
lives
for a nation where we
now
live
freely
today
. India has evolved as a whole nation
yet
, it is
still
a developing
country
. There are
some
things which are hurdles on the path of India becoming a developed
country
. These hurdles are what actually pose me to have a vision of how India would be without them. World is and would have
changed
dramatically
. Artificial intelligence and virtual reality would be dominating the
world
.
Eventually
India will
become
a developed
country
and would be at par with the western
countries
with
good
healthcare, infrastructure,
quality
of
life
and a high happiness index. The healthcare is
also
a major factor direct relation with the
quality
of
life
. I
want
India to be
capable
of handling situations like a pandemic to a greater extent with
improved
medical facilities. Improving health facilities does not
only
mean in making them better
but
also
available for all. There should be more hospitals like the
AIIMS
in the
country
with an increased bed capacity. Vehicles
move
on
roads
and
people
walk on
roads
. How does it feel when this concrete
having
no motion of itself
become
the reason of
having
fatal accidents and injuries? There are numerous
roads
having
potholes and
some
not even
properly
lay. It is not
only
the
roads
but
also
railway
tracks
that need attention. I
want
Indian
roads
to be the best example of the safest and
well made
roads
in the world. I wish India
becomes
a superpower
militarily
and
economically
. There are evidences that assert of India becoming number 1 economy followed by US, China and Japan.
Old
systems of living and cultural heritage
are revived
. The greatest gift to the
world
from India would be Sanskrit becoming dominant worldwide. Population would have decreased and India would not be as
densely
populated by percentage as it is
today
. India should
become
so
much self
dependant
that other
countries
would
have to
strive
hard
to invest in India. India should
become
a self-reliant
country
. There should be
enough
and equal opportunities for all sects of the society. There should be
some
provision of providing jobs to the illiterates. Everyone should be able to go to school irrespective of their gender.
Education
is a right
as well
as a duty. It is
education
that will
help
us combat poverty. Food is a basic right of
people
.
People
die
of starvation. By 2047, India should
become
a
country
where no one goes to bed without food.
People
should not beg for money and long for food.
Many
die
in
road
accidents due sleeping on the streets at night. I
want
India to be
capable
of providing food for at least twice a day and shelter. Farmers are the backbone of the
country
. They are the ones who provide support to
life
by growing crops. There are
a lot of
problems that farmers face like not getting
enough
money for their harvest or not being able to nurture the crops
properly
. By 2047, I
want
a boom in the agricultural sector like
having
the best
quality
machines to providing full support to the farmers for growing their crops.
Also
they should
be trained
about the seeds, machines and
fertilisers
. Knowledge is the greatest treasure one has. India should be
capable
of
having
a powerful higher
education
system and opportunities
so
that the youth does not have
leave
his
own
country
. This
also
relates to eradicating poverty and unemployment. I
want
India to
become
a corruption free
country
. The police and the
people
in power should work with honesty. Every official work should
be done
without any complications. Laws should
be exercised
more
meticulously
for it is
often
said that laws are not followed in India. India should
become
the example of a
law abiding
country
. Practices like bribing should
be punished
and fines should
be imposed
with more seriousness. A
country’s
biggest responsibility is the safety of its citizens. It is not that India is not a safe
country
but
,
women
are not safe in a large part of the
country
. I
want
women
to walk on every street on India
freely
, without
having
to
think
twice
before
stepping out at night. Every state and every
road
should be safe for
women
to
live
and walk on. The punishment for crime against
women
should be stricter and practiced
seriously
. My vision for India is to expand its infrastructure, medical facilities and all the factors affecting the
quality
of
life
. I
want
India to have a prominent stand in the
world
as an independent, self-reliant, self
capable
and a
country
to which other nations of the
world
would
be attracted
to. By 2047, India should
become
a developed
country
having
solved most of its problems. India should grow in all sectors like
education
, research, advancement in technology etc. It should
become
a
country
everyone would dream to
live
in.
Finally
, I wish India would be able to overcome these shortcomings and emerge as a prosperous
country
.
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