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Friendly and hardworking sales assistant required for busy music shop.July and August only 9:00 a.m-5:30 p.m six days a week.Apply enclosing your CV.

Friendly and hardworking sales assistant required for busy music shop. July and August only 9: 00 a. m-5: 30 p. m six days a week. Apply enclosing your CV. 1y397
Dear Sir or MadamI noticed the advertisement for a sales assistent on your website and am writing to apply for the post. Since I am going to start a degree in music at Washington University in May, I am keen to find a position which suits my interests in music. I have experience of working in retail. Last winter I spent four-week period as a sales assistant in a book shop. Furthermore, in your job description you say that applicants should be polite and honorable. I am all of the things and more. What I mean is that I believe I posses all the necessary personal qualities for the post. I am enthusiastic, good at communicating and friendly. I am enclosing my CV, including full contact details of my accomplishments and achievments. I can send references on request. If I pass my exam in June, I will be available to start work in July. If you feel I have potentional that you are looking for in a candidate then please do not hesitate to contact me to arrange an interview. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Jack Brown.
Dear Sir or
MadamI
noticed the advertisement for a sales
assistent
on your website and
am
writing to apply for the post. Since I am going to
start
a degree in music at Washington University in May, I am keen to find a position which suits my interests in music. I have experience of working in retail. Last winter I spent four-week period as a sales assistant in a book shop.
Furthermore
, in your job description you say that applicants should be polite and honorable. I am
all of the
things and more. What I mean is that I believe
I posses
all the necessary personal qualities for the post. I am enthusiastic,
good
at communicating and friendly. I am enclosing my CV, including full contact
details
of my accomplishments and
achievments
.
I
can
send
references on request. If I pass my exam in June, I will be available to
start
work in July. If you feel I have
potentional
that you are looking for in a candidate then
please
do not hesitate to contact me to arrange an interview. I look forward to hearing from you
soon
. Yours
faithfully
, Jack Brown.
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