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bullying, reasons and solutions

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Bullying is a common issue all around the world and it seems like situation increases its level of concern. It is quiet weird, because our generation is more tolerate than any ever existed and we live in the 21st century. What are the reasons and what are the roots of this problem? First of all, as I said earlier bulling is a common issue, so it doesn’t only effect children but grownups too. Still, the age group that needs most attention is a group of children. A place where they most often face with misunderstandings and hate from each other is school. Every child needs to attend school, it helps them to socialise, become smarter and at all discover the world. But among all the advantages it is possible to highlight few disadvantages and one of the misuses is bullying. I disagree with people who say that going through bullying is a normal practice for everyone. However, a lot of students still face with it every day. There is a huge range of reasons why some exact student can become a bully or be bullied. It can depend on how they dress or what body have or even what hair colour. Also some qualities that person cannot change or somehow have an influence on them. They are the following: body colour, acne, family wealth or for instance it can be religion. It is relative for me, because my friend have been bullied because of his religion and it was horrifying. One reason why bullies become bullies is their low self-esteem that could have become like this because of their parents’ attitude to them. Even among grownups there are a lot with low self-esteem who reflect their negative emotions to other people, sometimes close friend or family. Some of them do not understand the consequences of those action, some do it consciously and know what will happen further. It can be hard to overview all the solutions to bulling because it depends both on exact child and exact reason. And in my point of view it is necessary to pay attention to atmosphere where bullies grow and how they get those negative characteristics, also why they allow themselves to bully other children. About finding a solution to some exact problem such as family wealth, there already is one and it is school uniform. I am not so sure about the effort and were any researches been done but in theory it should work. It is important to mention the other side, where children will not have an opportunity to express themselves and some several disadvantages. To sum up, bulling continue to be a serious problem for children living nowadays. There is a huge amount of reasons why bulling still exist but not as many solutions and ways how to solve this problem.
Bullying is a common issue all around the world and it seems like situation increases its level of concern. It is
quiet
weird,
because
our generation is more tolerate than any ever
existed and
we
live
in the 21st century. What are the
reasons
and what are the roots of this problem?
First of all
, as I said earlier
bulling
is a common issue,
so
it doesn’t
only
effect
children
but
grownups too.
Still
, the age group that needs most attention is a group of
children
. A place where they most
often
face with misunderstandings and hate from each
other
is school. Every child needs to attend school, it
helps
them to
socialise
,
become
smarter and at all discover the world.
But
among all the advantages it is possible to highlight few disadvantages and one of the misuses is bullying. I disagree with
people
who say that going through bullying is a normal practice for everyone.
However
,
a lot of
students
still
face with it every day. There is a huge range of
reasons
why
some
exact
student can
become
a
bully
or
be bullied
. It can depend on how they dress or what body have or even what hair
colour
.
Also
some
qualities that person cannot
change
or somehow have an influence on them. They are the following: body
colour
, acne, family wealth or
for instance
it can be religion. It is relative for me,
because
my friend have
been bullied
because
of his religion and it was horrifying. One
reason
why
bullies
become
bullies
is their low self-esteem that could have
become
like this
because
of their parents’ attitude to them. Even among grownups there are a lot with low self-esteem who reflect their
negative
emotions to
other
people
,
sometimes
close friend or family.
Some
of them do not understand the consequences of those action,
some
do it
consciously
and know what will happen
further
. It can be
hard
to overview all the solutions to
bulling
because
it depends both on
exact
child and
exact
reason
. And in my point of view it is necessary to pay attention to atmosphere where
bullies
grow and how they
get
those
negative
characteristics,
also
why they
allow
themselves to
bully
other
children
. About finding a solution to
some
exact
problem such as family wealth, there already is one and it is school uniform. I am not
so
sure about the effort and were any researches
been done
but
in theory it should work. It is
important
to mention the
other
side, where
children
will not have an opportunity to express themselves and
some
several disadvantages. To sum up,
bulling
continue to be a serious problem for
children
living nowadays. There is a huge amount of
reasons
why
bulling
still
exist
but
not as
many
solutions and ways how to solve this problem.
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