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Why nowadays people are to expect to live longer thanks to the medical care that has been improving through the years.

Living longer is what everyone expect nowadays, more time is equal to more
experiences.
As we get older we know that thanks to the advance technology we expect to live
longer than the people before 2000s, As the years go by, new discoveries help
treat diseases that were deadly in the past, and thanks to new drugs and
treatments the most that can happen is a small cold.
Besides all the problems we may have there is always something in the drugstore
to make us feel better. In the past a little fever could end in death, but nowadays is
easier to get healthy with a simple pill. Is normal that now we get colds but is easy
to get rid of those.
A good example of how much the Medical technology has advanced to both the
level of the COVID pandemic. Exactly 100 years ago there was a pandemic known
as the Spanish flu where you could not do anything, if the flu gave you the chances
of dying were greater than 90%, the opposite of what the pandemic is today, where
nothing else 5% went undercover and the hospital depended a lot on that 5% but
little more than half was saved. Much difference thanks to medical advancement.
We can now say that thanks to the advance world we live in now we can be sure
that this new inventions will still progressing our time in this world it's going to keep
going up.
Living longer is what everyone
expect
nowadays, more time is equal to more

experiences
.

As
we
get
older we know that thanks to the advance technology we
expect
to
live


longer than the
people
before
2000s, As the years go by, new discoveries
help


treat diseases that were deadly in the past, and thanks to new drugs and

treatments
the most that can happen is a
small
cold
.

Besides
all the problems we may have there is always something in the drugstore

to
make
us feel better. In the past a
little
fever could
end
in death,
but
nowadays
is


easier
to
get
healthy with a simple pill. Is normal that now we
get
colds
but
is
easy


to
get
rid of those.

A
good
example of how much the Medical technology has advanced to both the

level
of the
COVID
pandemic. Exactly 100 years ago there was a pandemic
known


as the Spanish flu where you could not do anything, if the flu gave you the chances

of dying were greater than 90%, the opposite of what the pandemic is
today
, where

nothing else 5% went undercover and the hospital depended a lot on that 5%
but


little
more than half
was saved
. Much difference thanks to medical advancement.

We can now say that thanks to the advance world we
live
in now we can be sure

that this new inventions will
still
progressing
our time in this world it's going to
keep


going
up.

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