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Unemployment is a serious issue throughout the world. A number of changes need to be made to reduce the problem

Unbalance population growth in the country and the advance in various fields being one of the big problems in most countries in the global. In particular, making the amount of unemployed increased. Therefore, there are several solutions that can minimize the figure of unemployment and make the best use of human labor.
Lack of job vacancies that are available, however, the number of people who ready to work increases. Open up more jobs can be a solution for the government to increase the number of employees. For example, make cooperation with private companies where they can hire many people. Besides, government can provide initial capital to help the small and medium-sized enterprises. This would be great to encourage them to develop their business, which later they will also recruit some new workers.
Another reason is global conditions are getting more advanced and foreigners are accepted to work. Consequently, competition among workers is increasing, both between indigenous and foreign-natives. Because of this, for instance, government should make regulation about tighten immigration and prioritizing providing employment opportunities to local people than people from others country. Nevertheless, the government should open some training to increase their skill, so that they have the same abilities even more than foreign workers. As a result, we can maximize the quantities and quality of domestic workers.
In conclusion, there are many ways to cut down the amount of people who have not jobbed. My own view is that individuals should have motivation and job skills before needing government supports.
Unbalance population growth in the country and the advance in various fields being one of the
big
problems in most countries in the global.
In particular
, making the amount of unemployed increased.
Therefore
, there are several solutions that can minimize the figure of unemployment and
make
the best
use
of human labor.

Lack of job vacancies that are available,
however
, the number of people who ready to work increases. Open up more jobs can be a solution for the government to increase the number of employees.
For example
,
make
cooperation with private
companies
where they can hire
many
people.
Besides
, government can provide initial capital to
help
the
small
and medium-sized enterprises. This would be great to encourage them to develop their business, which later they will
also
recruit
some
new workers.

Another reason is global conditions are getting more advanced and foreigners are
accepted
to work.
Consequently
, competition among workers is increasing, both between indigenous and foreign-natives.
Because of this
,
for instance
, government
should
make
regulation about tighten immigration and prioritizing providing employment opportunities to local people than people from others country.
Nevertheless
, the government
should
open
some
training to increase their
skill
,
so
that they have the same abilities even more than foreign workers.
As a result
, we can maximize the quantities and quality of domestic workers.

In conclusion
, there are
many
ways to
cut
down the amount of people who have not jobbed. My
own
view is that individuals
should
have motivation and job
skills
before
needing government supports.

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