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Some people think that children should learn to obey and do as parents and teachers say . Others think that this kind of upbringing will not prepare our children for real life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is argued by people that youngsters must learn to obey and perform actions as according to their guardians and tuter choice but, other group of people believe this way makes children dependent on others. This essay juxtapose both views before embarking on my opinion.
There is no shadow of doubt that, we should obey to our care takers. Firstly, because they think about their childrens bright future and guide their young ones on every moment of life. our guardians have much experience than their off springs. For instance, i have numerous friends however, my parents as well as tuters always say to me that your some friends are not good and you should leave them and i realize this thing at last when they cheat me but may care takers make prediction before i think. That is why, youngers had better to obey their parents and teachers as they have vast knowledge than youngers and this way also inculcate moral values in childrens.
On the conterary side, some individuals deem that if kids do as their elders say to them this will negative effect on teens all round development. Parents must be guided to their off springs if they move on wrong path or induldge in bad groups but unnecessary interfarence is work as an obstacle in the succes of childrens. To illustrate, some times parents fall pressure on their youngers to choose subjects accoeding to them but childrens do not interest in those subjects. Consequently, in future they are unable to attain a lot of knowledge about these subjects due to lack of interest. Hence, it is necessary foe parents and teacher to doscover childrens hidden talent and give opportunity to explore the ideas and use their whole potential.
In conclusion, parents and teachers must be frindly at extent with their youngers, in this way childrens do not feel scared and show their latent talent and shine their name in golden words if parents provide some frredom to childrens, it makes them responsible.
It
is argued
by
people
that youngsters
must
learn to obey and perform actions as according to their guardians and
tuter
choice
but
, other group of
people
believe this way
makes
children dependent on others.
This essay juxtapose
both views
before
embarking on my opinion.

There is no shadow of doubt that, we should obey to our care takers.
Firstly
,
because
they
think
about their
childrens
bright future and guide their young ones on every moment of life.
our
guardians have much experience than their off springs.
For instance
,
i
have numerous friends
however
, my parents
as well
as
tuters
always say to me that your
some
friends are not
good
and you should
leave
them and
i
realize this thing at last when they cheat me
but
may care takers
make
prediction
before
i
think
.
That is
why,
youngers had
better to obey their parents and teachers as they have vast knowledge than
youngers
and this way
also
inculcate moral values in
childrens
.

On the
conterary
side,
some
individuals deem that if kids do as their elders say to them this will
negative
effect on teens all round development. Parents
must
be guided
to their off springs if they
move
on
wrong
path or
induldge
in
bad
groups
but
unnecessary
interfarence
is work as an obstacle in the
succes
of
childrens
. To illustrate,
some
times parents fall pressure on their
youngers
to choose subjects
accoeding
to them
but
childrens
do not interest in those subjects.
Consequently
, in future they are unable to attain
a lot of
knowledge about these subjects due to lack of interest.
Hence
, it
is necessary
foe parents and teacher to
doscover
childrens
hidden talent and give opportunity to explore the
ideas
and
use
their whole potential.

In conclusion
, parents and teachers
must
be
frindly
at extent with their
youngers
, in this way
childrens
do not feel scared and
show
their latent talent and shine their name in golden words if parents provide
some
frredom
to
childrens
, it
makes
them responsible.

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