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Some people think it is no longer necessary for children to go to school because they can do all their learning online. Others believe learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Recently, there are several discussions about schooling and deciding to choose children's study options between online or offline. This essay will present two both views, and I strongly agree that children should learn in schools.
On the one hand, there is no doubt in terms of online learning for students these days. Firstly, this kind of study leads to saving a great deal of time traveling and other costs. It is easy to learn and do homework on their computers without going to school. Secondly, various platforms and technological equitments for students can learn in the internet such as Zoom, Google meeting, … Thus, They have become more convenient for educators and children in difficult conditions such as bad weathers or covid-19 pandemic.
On the other hand, I would agree that children should be trained in physical school environments instead of online programs. First, there is a crucial interaction for students to debate or discuss any ideas with classmates and teachers. In other words, It plays a significant role in the growth of children to develop social skills and their careers. For example, students' friends, team-leaders, and team- players improve teenagers' teamwork skills before graduating. Moreover, learning in school have more opportunity to particular in outdoor activities and experience in reality after being training through lessons.
In conclusion, Although technology offers valuable support to the learning process, school-based learning offers so much more in terms of the development of social skills and the provision of immediate feedback loops within the learning process. As a result, learning in schools remains an essential and irreplaceable feature of education.
Recently, there are several discussions about schooling and deciding to choose children's study options between online or offline. This essay will present two both views, and I
strongly
agree
that children should learn in schools.

On the one hand, there is no doubt in terms of online learning for
students
these days.
Firstly
, this kind of study leads to saving a great deal of time traveling and other costs. It is easy to learn and do homework on their computers without going to school.
Secondly
, various platforms and technological
equitments
for
students
can learn
in the internet
such as Zoom, Google meeting, …
Thus
, They have become more convenient for educators and children in difficult conditions such as
bad
weathers or
covid-19
pandemic.

On the other hand, I would
agree
that children should
be trained
in physical school environments
instead
of online programs.
First
, there is a crucial interaction for
students
to debate or discuss any
ideas
with classmates and teachers. In other words, It plays a significant role in the growth of children to develop social skills and their careers.
For example
, students' friends, team-leaders, and team- players
improve
teenagers
' teamwork skills
before
graduating.
Moreover
, learning in school have more opportunity to particular in outdoor activities and experience in reality after being training through lessons.

In conclusion
, Although technology offers valuable support to the learning process, school-based learning offers
so
much more in terms of the development of social skills and the provision of immediate feedback loops within the learning process.
As a result
, learning in schools remains an essential and irreplaceable feature of education.

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